u betta....... * lyricalmatermind= warning*
 

u beat me with a no-show and u dont wanna rematch the battle,

so this is ya warning....

Ayo,
My flows clean.. serving these kids with wording, perfect..
announcin Wars on Stars, and Skywalkin on ya earthly surface..
u still learnin the scripts.. i've studied & majored..
& after all the times i've killed u, by now, u must be indangered..
readers, loving the flavor.. no denying, aint worth to argue..
I bring the verse to charr dude, with the words to scar you..
i'm cursed n harmful.. flow will serve n starve you..
Aint seen u in a while doggy, ur show was dope, I was lovin it
I always wondered where that dude from NY Undercover went
That widows peak is wack, barber had some shitty cutters
Cuz u lookin like the latino version of Eddie Munster
& kid u so yellow u could blend in against the wall
Plus it must be hard as fuck to blink..
..when ur eyebrows r 7 inches tall

lips like blastin 4, beef i aint ask for it thou..
but
MAN UP AND LETS DO THIS THE RIGHT WAY I AINT NO AVERAGE JOE.....
* from the show*

lyricalmatermind lets do this 16 lines come with it....

damn...structure was ass but still a nice read...come tryout for tha lunatiks if u wanna be in a crew...peep my shit "gettin attention"...1

upp'in for more replys...

y flows clean.. serving these kids with wording, perfect..
announcin Wars on Stars, and Skywalkin on ya earthly surface..
that was pure dopeness homie good drop...............

thanks for u'r feed back....

upp'in for more feed back plez...

aiight this was hot...gettin at my homie Lyrical but at least it was good...maybe he doesntave credits to battle...he battles a lot lol...anyway rtf on the long OM in my sig..9/10

thanks alot for ya feed back nah i dont have beef just want a proper battle u feel me?
thanks again upp'in

I thought it was good the flow was really good, I think that it will sound good in audio with a hot beat.