April 30th, 2005
aight, well i was trying to go into somethin different, but it turned out more of a continuation into the last poem i wrote...little something i did up for her someone's birthday...
______________________________________ 19 years ago to this day, the world received a gift conceived from a man and a woman, an angel was born a complexion so enchanting, i can feel my own spirit lift proving that a rose can exist... without the thorns an image inspired by goddesses, and molded to perfection a divine glow, which shines brighter than any star eyes beat a soft tenderness that glimmers with affection a tranquil voice and delicate touch, soothes any scar never to mourn, whenever your warm smile is near white pearls glistening, relieving the greatest pains an escape to a world, unknown and untouched by fear and your warm embrace melts the ice within my veins but with time itself, you seem to have the biggest impact for at moments, its as if he has stopped dead mesmorizing symmetry, leaving all but the mind intact gliding elegantly on waters no mortal could ever tread nothing to gain, pieces seem to arrange in place when your deep, vibrant eyes shimmer with hope finding happiness i thought i'd forever chase the melody of my life now harmonizes high notes it may not be much, but i write you this poem to remind you that others care, even if you feel all alone an all-round good person, what more can i say but forever live happily... and have a wonderful birthday |
uppin........:)
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thizs was good...this for your girl? i'm sure she liked it.....very nice vocab....everything jsut went together perfect....emotion was there and iot gave me a good mental picture....keep droppin man this was an enjoyable read
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Ahhhhhhhhh the imaginary was good man. Liked the meta'z in it. The wordplay and much more. The flow was very soothing. But overall nice piece, return a fav links in sig.
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wu word....bump
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