Freestyle (Been gon for a min, buh im bac)
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2133621

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2133616


juss a lil freestyle i threw together, been gone for a minute wit the audio buh im bac

beat= made by me
production/mixed= by me

im actually lookin for a collab on this beat, so if you down, holla at me

http://www.rideinconline.com/jamroo...&mode=song_hifi

ill beat.......had some real sick punches........liked ya flow was pretty nice over all



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189446 hit me wit some feed

thanks son good lookin,..................uppin.................... ........................................

ur beat makin is gettin betta homie........as is your quality...a free? how comes u got adlibs etc lol..lyrically its nice some nice lil witty line, u got a swagger about yo flow, which is dope...ur flow is on beat flawlessly, u gettin nce on the mic...ohhh its nice when the beat cuts 4 a sec n u rhyme acapella n kik bak in..shit was dope n worth a dload..im fellin dis beat da more i listen..ma gun smoke so much ud think it got cancer lmao...nice

:thumbup:

yo RTF on ma battle wid Mad Dog link in sig..peace fam

good lookin son, thanks for the feedback, i got u ...................uppin yall

is hard to imagine this was a free has adlibs..lol but beat is aight...missin some strings here and there...

first time am hearin yo voice u sound yung, punches was pretty good......adlibs could be done betta but u kinda sound like that kid wus his name i forgat it now..lol

overall ok track

it wasnt a freestyle, freestyle, buh it was verses i had juss put together off the top and shit..........good lookin though, ........................uppin

Beat is nice enjoying it lyrics were pretty good too

voice overs should be taken out ;) not considered a freestyle maybe a prewritten

nice quality flows good too

ite ite, good lookin............................uppin

lyrics are dope. beat is doper...what beat is that? but, ad libs werent all that, which made yo verse sound kinda off...and u sound kinda low in volume. fix that next time. but voicing is coo...i like it!


9/10

thanks man, thats actually a beat i made..................uppin

Uppin..............

if u did produce this beat by urself this is pretty dam nyce u gonna have to get at me with one sumtime lol.. flow is on beat. sum parts u struggle but u got a good voice just needs to be developed . lol my fav line was tha guns are ready to dump like theyre constipaded... i like how u end it too. good shyt famz peep my shyts sumtime homey...

pz

ite son thanks .............................Uppin................ .............

yo, rtf on truth hurts if u can bruh... if not thats straight... ima peep ur next drop too tho cuz this was nyce