b-gurl vs confidential
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 6

Check in by: 05-07-05 at 11:54 AM

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b-gurl has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 11:29 AM.

confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials
he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential**
like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential
2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'***
didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'****
callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!'
hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential'

*-the result
**-forceful,'torrential rain'
***-perfect example of class/quality
****-Lacking importance

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 11:50 AM.

u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland....

b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan
but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA*

if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape

u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though
If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA*

Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either
Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056

N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared
diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH....

good luck baby girl

explanation....

her bank look like this....

Money on Hand: 80
Money in the Bank: 22000000
Bank Account Number: XPETBK-40704

and she is from: ireland
she is: 17

for the 4th and 5bar in my verse...
she had posted some pic of her-self in her crib: http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056


now lets get some votes and i should of posted this in my verse at the bottom i FUCKED UP but here are the explanation if u need them...

Voted For: b-gurl

confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials
^^
THIS IS NOT A PUNCH..MORE SELF/GLORY 1/10
he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential**
like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential
^^
SELF GORY...BUT GUD RHYME! 2/10
2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'***
didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'****
^^
BETTER..BUT STILL..3/10
callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!'
hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential'
^^KINDA PUNCH..3/10

B-GURL..YA STRUCTURE WAS GOOD..FLOWED WELL AND U HAD NICE VOCAB.#
BUT PROBLEM IS ALL THATS LIKE ONLY 15-20% OF A GOOD VERSE THE REST IS ALL ABOUT PUNCHES & PERSONALS WHICH U HAD NONE.
YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO DISS YA OPPONENT.
YOU DID WELL TO RHYME ALL THOSE WORDS THO PROPS..BUT IT ISNT NESSACARY.

U CUDA SAID SUMTHIN LIKE

this guy will neva be sick..coz hes so non "influ"ential..
Ya rhymes are like ya bank balance..you no "cred"ential..

its all about how u word stuff..jus get more creative
see how i usued influ as a meta for influenza/sickness
and cred ential as credits i.e money..

jus upp ya game gurl

confidential

u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland....
^^gud personal...6/10

b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan
but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA*
hmmmm..5/10

if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape
^^lol...decent 6/10
u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though
If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA*
^^^like it nice bar 7/10
Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either
Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056
^^lol.yup decent personal wit da link as proof 6/10
N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared
diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH....
^^^ok closer 5/10

yeh...gud drop confidential...basically murdered bgurl wit punches and creativity..keep it upp

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Voted For: confidential

I really wanted to vote for Bgirl here.... she has the more consumate flow and sharpened intellect... but she didn't attack her opponent at all.... She got thumbs up from me for her complexity and thought process, but first dude grabbed this with some actual punches... tho nothin that great...

Vote Confidential...


rtf...

Voted For: b-gurl

well my vote goes to b gurl she came hard with good vocab and decent punches

con, you did better in your battle w/me elevate

no hate con just wasn't felling it and what's up with the bad link?

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upp'in this battle................................

Voted For: b-gurl

confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials
he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential**
like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential
2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'***
didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'****
callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!'
hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential'
=7/10 a ok verse just make ya lines longer n it will be alot better..........

vs

u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland....

b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan
but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA*

if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape

u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though
If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA*

Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either
Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056

N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared
diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH....
=6.5/10 also an ok verse but alot of it didnt ryhme..........

v/b-gurl..........

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yeah thanx efecx, was like my first battle lol wasnt prewritten or anythin, the punches i spose r more subtle than straight out callin him bitch lol but i'll do that next time! lol ;)

upp'in and no exchanging votes,
i want honest straight up explain votes