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Bonecollector vs Evolution
Battle Rules:
8-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Due in an hour After Check Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-07-05 at 10:36 PM Must drop verse in 70 minutes after check in. |
Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 09:41 PM.
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Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 09:58 PM.
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bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need to for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit ... |
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit ... |
Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose?:( but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... |
..whose ^Lucifier^ ?? ...cuz that isnt me..good drop anywayz
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Voted For: Bonecollector
BONE punches were on target and hit well....flow was good i liked how it flowed in this specific verse...structure was also good and a bit diff but easie to read....vocab was ight not your best but okay... evoloution...punches didnt hit very well sum did but sum were just fillers..flow was ight basic but good...structure was ight too nuthin speacial but enough..vocab was off too simple and your verse just didnt hit him like he hit you good drop both yall though but bone getz this IMO RETURN THA FAVOUR ON ANY OF MY OPEN BATLES Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Evolution
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin 5...mah man, aint feelin this, just filler!! ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname 5...nice punch but cud be better!! rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved 6...LoL!!! gud meta in there!! u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one 6...gud shit again!!!! they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit 5...not feelin the closer, too played!! OVERALL: 27/60 Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... 6...gud play off his name!!! ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... 6...first line filler, 2nd line was a gud meta tho!! Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... 5...not feelin it!!! ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... 4...BOOOO!!! that is self - g shit!!! ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... 5...filler, not really feelin it!!! OVERALL: 26/60 both came pretty weak...close one to call but i'm gonna have to go with Evolution because Bone dropped a self-g line in his verse and they are more played than video games!!! V/ - Evolution RTF!!! if ya ain't already....check my stats for battle links!!! |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Aight Check It.. Bonecollecor: Hottest Line Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... Evolution: Hottest Line rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved Overall: I Would Give This Battle To Bonecollector For The Simple Fact That His Wording Had The Concepts and Devlievry A Battle Vesrse Should Have. He Had Better Punches and Personals. Evolution, Just Work On Wording...Your Hottest Line Could've Beat His Whole Verse If You Woulda Worded It Better. Use More of A Metaphor. ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Yo this wuz some weak shit.......on da real thoe....both cats need to work on Punchlines instead claimin how ur flow or lyrics or ability is da best........but yo Evolution wuz juss plain wack and Bone collector at least had some decent punches so i vote him............ Vote - Bonecollector |
Voted For: Evolution
bone..u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin alright 6.5/10 ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname koo..... 7.3/10 rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved Hot 8.1/10 u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one bad 4.3 they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit funny ass shit 8.5/10 overall: 34.7/50 Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... bad 4.0/10 ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... alright 5.0/10 Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... ok... 5.0/10 ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... really bad 4.0/10 ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... ok 5.0/10 23/50 V/Evolution Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Evolution
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin Eh....4/10 ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname Not bad...5/10 rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved Liked this punch...7/10 u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one Pretty funny...6/10 they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit Nice...7/10 Overall: 29/50 Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... Eh...4/10 ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... Nah....4/10 Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... Eh...5/10 ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... Wack....3/10 ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... Gay punch....3/10 Overall: 19/50 His verse was just better so... Vote: Evolution Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
bone got this super easy ...... look'n Z@ p-olls ..
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Voted For: Bonecollector
clooose battle... BC- You had a coupla lines I liked... that soap bubble ish was aiite... and the maryjane shit was nice... The rest was pretty simplistic but slightly effective... such as food chain and hardly hit... Ev- you had a coupla lines I liked... money where mouth is... and the 2 hour joint... the rest sorta fell flat... pick wack or played was coo... both y'allh ad pretty good structure and flow... Imma give this the Bone off the strength of like one line.... just felt he came slighhhtly more creative with his.... close one... Vote Bonecollector |
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