Shard vs Retrospecktive
 

Redo i'm puting my verse from the other battle he didint check in and it closed

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Retrospecktive has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 10:21 PM.

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Shard has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 10:55 PM.

This faggot can't have gats with his dictionary in hand...
only way he fuck up wax...is doin' missionary wit crayons...
yea... I set the tone n' homeboy can't keep up in text...
girls n' Ret? pft foamy beer is how this runt get head...
crush his best... his strength aint enuff ta make the grade...
but yea his bicep ripped.... if he tryta lift a paperweight!
its kinda strange... he kinda like Chris Farley on trains...
cuz this fatass...
dead on tracks as I smoke his intellect like Marley's brain...

Nigga feeding off my shit don't matter u stilll suck...

bitch where did I feed? Makin' funna your vocabulary doesn't translate as feedin... I never mentioned any of your concepts.. stfu.



oh yea... WHERE are your fuckin' punches, chump?

uh nigga paperweight i used that shit nigga can't figure ur own words nigga u stfu dumb ass

lol... I didn't even notice you used paperweight kid... so what? Do you have coypyright on the fuckin' word? haha... smh


The point is I did not feed off any of your concepts... I unknowingly used a "word" you used... thats not feeding you idiot... now quit cryin...

Voted For: Retrospecktive

Shard got nothing im here to celabrate as the chief of state
Flow at any rate, here to speculate and evaporate weak advocates
nice multies here, punch was average
You aint nothing but a weak probability, not a responsability
With no flow flexibilty, and raps a sport witch you got no capability's
avg punch here
In this leauge nor a freestyle state, i circulate to locate my captivate
I'm am skilled u and rap got 2 seperate, exspecialy when ur skills paperweight
pretty decent punch here
You got no duration i'll give a skill donation heres some information
No discrimination but i need no guns for an infamous assassination
this punch was kinda weak here

Overall: Retro u had a nice use of multies there, the punches were
pretty good for a new person on RV.. the flow was decent & the vocab
was okay there, but overall u had a nice use of multies, average punches
& a decent structure.. nice shit from you for a rook.. 6/10

This faggot can't have gats with his dictionary in hand...
only way he fuck up wax...is doin' missionary wit crayons...
nope, punch was weak here
yea... I set the tone n' homeboy can't keep up in text...
girls n' Ret? pft foamy beer is how this runt get head...
avg punch
crush his best... his strength aint enuff ta make the grade...
but yea his bicep ripped.... if he tryta lift a paperweight!
both used paperweight… weird
its kinda strange... he kinda like Chris Farley on trains...
cuz this fatass...
dead on tracks as I smoke his intellect like Marley's brain...
nope, weak here

Overall: Shard this was not 1 of ur best.. seen better, but u had weak
punches throughout ur whole drop.. ur structure was decent & ur vocab
was pretty decent too, elevate on ur punches here, cuz ur other battle
was better than this one here, but do better next time though.. 4/10

no hate..

RTF Retro

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word thanks for votin...


I'd rtf but I think i've voted on all ur battles...

Voted For: Retrospecktive

V/Retrospecktive.....this was a good battle....but retro has my vote he came wit strong punchs good vocab an good structure....he was creative wit every line....Shard...u came a little less creative u had some good punchs but sum played...an ur vocab was basic...i feel u came to lightly wit this one....work on those things........No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR....(OR U'LL NEVER RECIEVE AN HONEST VOTE FROM ME AGIAN)
Opener=r
CLoser=Tie
Structure=Tie
Punchs=r
Personals=r
Wordplay=r
Vocab=r
Multi's=tie(not many)
Overall=Retrospecktive

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lol.... this is crazy...

um...

2-0 Ret I guess...



Didn't mean 2 have no bad words with u son, I jus don't like bein
accused of feeding...


upppp

Voted For: Shard

Shard got nothing im here to celabrate as the chief of state
Flow at any rate, here to speculate and evaporate weak advocates
good vocab N flow...

You aint nothing but a weak probability, not a responsability
With no flow flexibilty, and raps a sport witch you got no capability's
decent try on multis,decent vocab no punch still..

In this leauge nor a freestyle state, i circulate to locate my captivate
I'm am skilled u and rap got 2 seperate, exspecialy when ur skills paperweight
ok decent....

You got no duration i'll give a skill donation heres some information
No discrimination but i need no guns for an infamous assassination
did u use like rhymezone.com or something like that cuz it look like u just tryed to use a bounch of big words and aint really use a personal or a punch but decent drop...

6.5/10


This faggot can't have gats with his dictionary in hand...
only way he fuck up wax...is doin' missionary wit crayons...
decent attemp at a punch

yea... I set the tone n' homeboy can't keep up in text...
girls n' Ret? pft foamy beer is how this runt get head...
dont get it...what??

crush his best... his strength aint enuff ta make the grade...
but yea his bicep ripped.... if he tryta lift a paperweight!
funny how ya flip a bar ya both use just diffrerent *paperweight*

its kinda strange... he kinda like Chris Farley on trains...
cuz this fatass...
dead on tracks as I smoke his intellect like Marley's brain...
nice ending... good punch...

u had a better flow with punch that was decent nice ending u aint try to use to vocab but still kept it creative nice job..

8/10