LFS The Great vs rippin/blessing
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-10-05 at 11:26 PM

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LFS The Great has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 11:27 PM.

rippin/blessing has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 02:12 AM.

I probably snap spinal cords spontanously torn rips//
Bentley you’re a bitch and you’re a bitch so every one likes watch your gay porn flicks//
Life goes on only if its riten by the hands of jesus//
I stand a man reppin genius out the bible im the next profit homie bleave it//



im hectic in freestyle my punches always ripp//
After You look to speak but the only thing uttered is a lisp//
You mutter but still your blood drips//
Cuss Im ill consider the ill verbally of ill battles//
You thought I was joken about your bitch till I rod her like a sattle//
Buckle up this a bump road to take expessly if your sparin with blessings//
I rep gensusi lab so I guess gods son your testing//
Trying to defeat me is like popin shots of like ghost//
Kid it ant t happin im to hot all burn your ass black like toast//
Maby then yawl probably fit in them over sized close //

Man how can this guy honestly think he has the skills to beat me?
When he doesn't have a way with words, he can't even spell verbally,*
I hope this guy is an alias to someone good cuz currently he's "new to RV",
You know this guy's a noob when he doesn't even have as many posts as me,
Flying circles around his head, leavin him and his mama distressin,
I'm "rippin" slashes in his ass, have him readressin his "blessing",**
Aw shit my structure is fucked oh well it won't matter in this one,
Cuz you stepped over your boundaries like letchup leakin out hotdog buns,
This guy is beggin for battles but to tell the truth why is he's doin so,***
Truth be told rippin/blessing could hold his own against Who? Mike Jones,
Wanna know why you don't have battles, it's not really hard to decipher,
Niggas feel bad about your skills after readin your 80+ posts in the Cypher,****
Lemme end this shit now before I make him commit suicide cuz of the stress,
But one thing, next time think before you fathom fuckin with The Great LFS....


* He spelled verbally wrong in his sig.
**His name is rippin/blessing.
*** He's in "Front Lines" askin for battles constantly.
*** He has TONS of posts in the "Cypher" forum.

uppin this battle....c'mon this is an easy vote.....me lol

c'mon vote on this please lol.....................

Voted For: LFS The Great

Ai This Is some hectic shit yall doin here wtf is goin on in Rippins verse ?

Any way

aii I Alreadt knew who toke this battle by lookin at the name LOL no Offense but Rippin yOu nedd to learn how to use your lines and step up your game a Lil Bit Man Learn How to throw a punch towrads your oppenent and hw to use your Personals Man So Thats What I Think That You need to work on Personally

LFS
You was Rippin This blessing This Time LOL Really I cant Say much excpept that You really Did take this one You need to try to fix ya structure for future references and ETC. You should know what you need to elevate in ri? r............rii

RTF in The battle link in my Sig Please

damn Stanza...cant vote...No Crew rule...but I would...I keep ALL rtf promises....

This was feedback posted for LFS The Great
 

polls bitches..............................

uppin this battle...PLEASE respond................

Voted For: LFS The Great

Ummmmmmmmmm No Explanation Really Needed But What The Hell!....

CREATIVENESS.....LFS
USE OF WORDPLAY......LFS
USE OF MULTIZ.......(NOONE)
USE OF PUNCHES......LFS
TEXTUAL FLOW.........LFS
STRUCTURE...........LFS
PERSONALS...........LFS

Overall...Look At Rippin/Blessings Verse...Then Look At LFS's Verse...You'll Understand My Vote!

RETURN DA FAVOR..*NO HATE PLZ!*

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...140594&posted=1

^Link To My Battle...

This was feedback posted for LFS The Great
 

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I probably snap spinal cords spontanously torn rips//
Bentley you’re a bitch and you’re a bitch so every one likes watch your gay porn flicks//

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Making any possible sense of that is impossible.

uppin this shit...btw check my other battle wit that herb Cri$....

Voted For: LFS The Great

1-sided battle here....obvious

opener = LFS
personas = LFS
punches = LFS..all were kinda weak tho
structure = tie
multies = no1
flow = tie
closer = rippin

overall LFS took this one.........