Evolution vs Young Blaze
 

Battle Rules:

10-14 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-08-05 at 01:41 AM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 01:20 AM.

Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 01:40 AM.

Fast one .............

I Get Him Stabbed With A Meat Sword Leaving His Knees Sore
And The Only Time E Is Close To A W Is On The Key Borad
Ya Get Popped with Shotties In The Ocean Is Where I Toss ya Body
(E) Get Chewed Then Spitted Out Like The Cops just Caught me
Gettin iller as Time Grows, 'E' ya fell off just like Pine Cones
Cant get a "W" doing handstands underneath Mcdonalds Sign Post
A burden on Health Care, "Shootin at Will" like drive bys in Bellaire
straight "Splittin E" Like Ravers On Welfair
Heat Grippen to ma swift lyrics that Keep Rippen
Holy Shit! i just "Swallowed E"....and i ain't even Trippen
Teasin Me?, Fuck! Watch Ma Cliques In A Slug Rage
Damm Im "Droppin-E" Worse Than Addicts In A Drug Raid
Work On Stoppin The Fill, Fuck Law! You Coppin A Thrill
Droppin A Kill Jus So I Can "Eat E" Alive, Like Im Popin Sum Pills

Think of the punchs...if u dont get it dont vote....

Voted For: Young Blaze

Young blaze got this more punches really better flow personals and mostly punches ....u win this
Evoloution u chould of had it but ur punches and lfow was off like crazy u needed to be more elavated in this battle so i got to give it toYoung Blaze i think so he had a more experimental verse got me iight holla back yall ~1

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Voted For: Evolution

aiight decent battle young blaze eh you came aiight wasnt feelin many of your punches structure was bad you need to fix that up some of your punches were good but that structure fucked it dawg fix that an you'll be good...Evo aswell bad structure even worse than young blazes but you came with better punches in my opinion thats why ima give this W to you..=1=

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Voted For: Evolution

Young thinking he rich.. shit.. we all know that this kid’s rhymes are poor
Get hit by a door.. & watch me mop up more Blaze.. than a school janitor
7...LoL!!! the second line was pretty funny!!
You want more? ..bitch please.. we all know your more gayer than Barney
Bite me.. & I’d put myself in your shoes.. but you can’t afford any
4...played concept, not feelin this!!
You suck B.. don’t go around saying you rich on the net.. when you’re a debtor*
I’ll give you a fetter.. & I wasn’t talking about the flu.. when I told you to get better*
6...decent multi, ok meta!!
Get out of my face kid.. you can’t rap.. shit.. your just another wannabe-fake
That aint no mistake.. n’ I’ll break your keyboard.. till you know you can’t escape
6...again, decent multi and meta!!
Giving you a headache.. and I’m about to destroy this herb.. in the worst way
Putting you in the ashtray.. god never gave you know gift.. he just forgot your birthday
5...weak, not feelin it!!
Fuck out of my way.. what’s the purpose of even trying on this kid?
Make bids.. & your verse is as bad.. as your fucking crew in your sig
7...LMAO!!! owning the crew!!!
I’m through with this.. but you have no talent.. I know this child’s a bum
Your just dumb.. & he was on top of the line.. that I threw his ass from
6...decent closer!!

OVERALL: 41/70


I Get Him Stabbed With A Meat Sword Leaving His Knees Sore
And The Only Time E Is Close To A W Is On The Key Borad
5...played concept with that "W" shit!!
Ya Get Popped with Shotties In The Ocean Is Where I Toss ya Body
(E) Get Chewed Then Spitted Out Like The Cops just Caught me
5...weak again, not feelin ya so far!!
Gettin iller as Time Grows, 'E' ya fell off just like Pine Cones
Cant get a "W" doing handstands underneath Mcdonalds Sign Post
7...LMFAO!!! this line cracks me up!!
A burden on Health Care, "Shootin at Will" like drive bys in Bellaire
straight "Splittin E" Like Ravers On Welfair
6...decent bar but first line was stretched!!
Heat Grippen to ma swift lyrics that Keep Rippen
Holy Shit! i just "Swallowed E"....and i ain't even Trippen
6...decent meta!!
Teasin Me?, Fuck! Watch Ma Cliques In A Slug Rage
Damm Im "Droppin-E" Worse Than Addicts In A Drug Raid
6...keepin with this E shit, GUD!!
Work On Stoppin The Fill, Fuck Law! You Coppin A Thrill
Droppin A Kill Jus So I Can "Eat E" Alive, Like Im Popin Sum Pills
5...weak closer, ya played with the "E" shit gud up until now cuz them poppin pillz lines are played!!

OVERALL: 40/70

fuck me....a decent and close battle....blaze came with some decent metas as usual and stayed on the "E" topic but had a couple of played concepts....evolution was just more consistent with his punches, he wasn't overly creative but he stayed thorough which is what i think helped him to take this battle just!!! No hate, just voting honest!!! :thumbup:

Props to both for a decent battle!!!

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Voted For: Evolution

Evo -Allright, nice drop here yo. The structure was pretty good and it set the lines up to flow nicely. The punches were good as well...quite a lot of them made me laugh...nice verse...

Young Blaze - This was a dope drop as well...the structure wasn't as on as Evo's but it still had a good flow...some of your punches were played though, and I have seen them before...but this was still a good drop...

I'm going to have to give it to Evo though for more originallity in his punches...

Vote: Evo

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Voted For: Evolution

Young thinking he rich.. shit.. we all know that this kid’s rhymes are poor
Get hit by a door.. & watch me mop up more Blaze.. than a school janitor
You want more? ..bitch please.. we all know your more gayer than Barney
Bite me.. & I’d put myself in your shoes.. but you can’t afford any
You suck B.. don’t go around saying you rich on the net.. when you’re a debtor*
I’ll give you a fetter.. & I wasn’t talking about the flu.. when I told you to get better*
Get out of my face kid.. you can’t rap.. shit.. your just another wannabe-fake
That aint no mistake.. n’ I’ll break your keyboard.. till you know you can’t escape
Giving you a headache.. and I’m about to destroy this herb.. in the worst way
Putting you in the ashtray.. god never gave you know gift.. he just forgot your birthday
Fuck out of my way.. what’s the purpose of even trying on this kid?
Make bids.. & your verse is as bad.. as your fucking crew in your sig
I’m through with this.. but you have no talent.. I know this child’s a bum
Your just dumb.. & he was on top of the line.. that I threw his ass from

Yo Dat Verse Wuz Real Nice, Thru Out U Stayed On Point, Da Personals Were Good, Da Structure An Da Complex Scheme Of Build Up Linez Then Killer Punchez Really Took Its Toll In Da Batt,e Good Drop, U Got Diz EZ

I Get Him Stabbed With A Meat Sword Leaving His Knees Sore
And The Only Time E Is Close To A W Is On The Key Borad
Ya Get Popped with Shotties In The Ocean Is Where I Toss ya Body
(E) Get Chewed Then Spitted Out Like The Cops just Caught me
Gettin iller as Time Grows, 'E' ya fell off just like Pine Cones
Cant get a "W" doing handstands underneath Mcdonalds Sign Post
A burden on Health Care, "Shootin at Will" like drive bys in Bellaire
straight "Splittin E" Like Ravers On Welfair
Heat Grippen to ma swift lyrics that Keep Rippen
Holy Shit! i just "Swallowed E"....and i ain't even Trippen
Teasin Me?, Fuck! Watch Ma Cliques In A Slug Rage
Damm Im "Droppin-E" Worse Than Addicts In A Drug Raid
Work On Stoppin The Fill, Fuck Law! You Coppin A Thrill
Droppin A Kill Jus So I Can "Eat E" Alive, Like Im Popin Sum Pills


Yo Nice Punz Young Blaze, Da Verse Wuz Wild, Only Thang Iz u Didnt Stay Focuzed On Da Personal Level Lyke Da Kid Apostrophe, Both Had Sum Decent Rhymez, But Apostrophe Hit Hard Wit Da Consistant Droppin Personals & Punz

V/Apostrophe

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Voted For: Young Blaze

I was feelin YoungN's flow more and likes thought on of his punches was nice "A burdern to healthcare, shootin at will like drive bys in bellair" dat line was nice....but basicly Both verses were weak on the diss departments and Young had some nice wordlplay and alright punches while Evo or Apostrophe had nice flow better vocabe....if i could give it a tie i would but im leanin more towards Young on dis one