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Viva 05-08-05 06:27 PM

b-gurl vs retrospecktive
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 6

Check in by: 05-08-05 at 06:57 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 05-08-05 06:28 PM

Retrospecktive has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 06:28 PM.

System 05-08-05 06:30 PM

b-gurl has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 06:30 PM.

Retrospecktive 05-08-05 06:34 PM

You're a weak femcee a slutty gurl willing to bite
My point is, how can u join 2 months ago and still be new 2 the site
You can tell she new waitin' for wack people to vote only need 6 post's
Almost ingaged a vote nope, you're like diherea u've been Diagnosed
Girl u just a weak person fuckin with the wronge kind of authority
you got a Silent majority with a weak goal settin no priority's
You're face looks like a disgrace to mothernatures mistakes
To get rid of u people wanna keep on killing u and dispose u in diffrent lakes

quick like she said

Viva 05-08-05 06:38 PM

What!? u think u got a 'new angle on dopeness?'*
I think this muthafucka gon and lost sum 'focus!'
If u wanna 'see' a 'new degree'** on how 2 emcee
I'll teach u, cuz i do this shit-- 'effortlessly'
I'll even 'break yo neck' so its easier 4 u to see!
u wanna talk about 'angles', mathematics*** n shit
how da fuck u gon do dat wen u dnt even no english yet!?
fuck it. its over i aint even gona waste my breath,
like u will when my verbal bullets puncture your chest!


*It's in his sig
**also in his sig
***reference to degrees(mathematics)
if u dont understand anything else-dont vote!

Retrospecktive 05-08-05 07:29 PM

Uppin this.............................................. .

AckRite 05-08-05 07:40 PM

Voted For: Retrospecktive

You're a weak femcee a slutty gurl willing to bite
My point is, how can u join 2 months ago and still be new 2 the site
Ahaha...I Like That Shit...Nice Lil Personal...7/10
You can tell she new waitin' for wack people to vote only need 6 post's
Almost ingaged a vote nope, you're like diherea u've been Diagnosed
I'd Prefer Da 1st Line...5/10
Girl u just a weak person fuckin with the wronge kind of authority
you got a Silent majority with a weak goal settin no priority's
Ahhhhh It Was Aight...Didnt Hit Real Hard Tho 5.5/10
You're face looks like a disgrace to mothernatures mistakes
To get rid of u people wanna keep on killing u and dispose u in diffrent lakes
Nice Finish....6/10


What!? u think u got a 'new angle on dopeness?'*
I think this muthafucka gon and lost sum 'focus!'
Nah Mami...No Hits...4/10
If u wanna 'see' a 'new degree'** on how 2 emcee
I'll teach u, cuz i do this shit-- 'effortlessly'
Best Line You Had Foreal...6.5/10
I'll even 'break yo neck' so its easier 4 u to see!
u wanna talk about 'angles', mathematics*** n shit
how da fuck u gon do dat wen u dnt even no english yet!?
I Take It Dis Was 2 Line Not Three...Cuz Da 1st Line Didnt Rhyme Wit Da Rest...4.5/10
fuck it. its over i aint even gona waste my breath,
like u will when my verbal bullets puncture your chest!
Nice Endin Ma...Da Rest Was Noooo...5.5/10

Overall - Retro Got This...He Used More Personals, His Flow Was Much Betta, Lines Made More Sense......B-Gurl Work On Ya Punches & Flow......Foreal

Armada Da 187 05-08-05 07:52 PM

Voted For: Retrospecktive

voted for retro

retro got this due to harder punches and more creative personals

punches- retro
personals-retro
multies-retro
flow- tie
strucutre- tie
wordplay- retro

retro gets it due to more creative personals and harder punches

i was feelin his personals more then b 's verse

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Retrospecktive 05-11-05 05:20 PM

Uppin Dis Mutha-Fucka shit.................................Retro...

BiZzO 05-13-05 09:25 AM

Voted For: Retrospecktive

fuck this was a easy battle to judge.. damnnnnnnnnnnnnnn retro killed it in everything mayne... girl u needa improve holla at me if u want help...
opener - R
closer - R
flow - R
punches - R
vocab - R
overall - R..
no hate how i saw it

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AutoMatik 05-13-05 09:59 AM

Voted For: Retrospecktive

basicly its a one sided battle..i don't even gotta do a whole explaion...b-burl...get a new name...and elevate....~1~

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Viva 05-13-05 04:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by AutoMatik
Voted For: Retrospecktive

basicly its a one sided battle..i don't even gotta do a whole explaion...b-burl...get a new name...and elevate....~1~



^^^damn! that wasnt nice! i aint as bad as sum of the cats on here!!!! :spit:

Dirty Nigga 05-14-05 05:48 AM

Voted For: Retrospecktive

Retro easily got the win, hands down, no contest, no need ta even explain it...................

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henrey_the_8th 05-26-05 12:03 PM

Voted For: b-gurl

I like all the math shit you droped, and you had a strong finish, Retro-5/10 Gurl-7/10

josh654789 05-26-05 05:32 PM

This was feedback posted for b-gurl
 
i dont feel like explainin all the stuff to vote...but, both verses were alright...liked b-gurls a little better though


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