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Hells Fire Vs. Forgotten Flow
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yea checkin in this bitch man
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Yo im requesting a new topic lol
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check 1 2 check 1 2 hell back what you gone do...haha good luck kid
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hmmm....... tournaments always seem to get started with out me
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deepening crevasse
It was the day after momie said watch the addiction
i woke up from a sunny day with a rainy complextion tears falling from the percipitation and mediation staying up that night injection watchin the television toons seemed to follow migration beyond animation mickey mouse grew damnation telling the imagination "you fucked beyond prognation with no stagnation" plutos bark was deafication till i noticed medication doctor flashed in sayin "save patient" and erratication my heart pumped the deprevation without oxidation eyes looked like camp consentration without eradictation the light came to observation and eyes began dilation bamb bamb! electrication brought back physical education parental with biblical meditation and crying over mediation the classes and theraputation never worked on vacation kid looked like he was asian playin my weak mind caucasion flame to the spoon ignition the flame brought actual vision "im sorry" beep goes respiration and heart elliptical equation nerotic with body on vibration and foamin mouth like extracation the holy water set agrivation for more heroin to seek succession night a battle for hell fire nation the soul. mental, and physication stroke to stroke bleedation and attack to attack vein clogation nurse and staff in location until body went to steady arc patient not stinkin thank biblication and my father for this life pray unison this morning i start dedication and lay off needle to arm stabation Crevasse peaked to ellivation and valley showed its erridation showing a shadowed vission to what years of stupid addmiration hope to never pave cementation or maybe end fire to cremation the fire went to visual fortification please god keep the givin ration i need guidance and forgive patient for death of son and arsonation jail bar-ed mentally sentence vacation no palm tree just starvation demon dead from deprivation but individual hoping for reservation yo sorry i hit the maximum i dont know if the last lines were needed but i added...ill have votes tomorrow drop some feed....holla :spit: :thumbup: |
MY LINES AINT STRECHED, I SPIT TOPICALS FAST. GO TO MY SOUNDCLICK AND LISTEN TO PURGATORY. THAT WAS A TOPICAL WIT "STRECHED LINES"
. . . . . Journy wit me into a sector in the brain defined by rigorous glacial features, Observe a childhood, that was deprived and regurgitated on by teachers and preachers, Lets travel through the nervous system into the crevasse of the Cerebellum’s stories, And find the earth shattering truth and pain a person keeps hidden beyond their glory… At age 12, I first started sulking in the thoughts of the worthlessness of my life, Twice, I wanted to exhibit the use that was newly found by me for the knife, My life was rearranged, I allowed my internal feelings of the world to be emitted outside, I was Gods yoyo, no matter how far I got I always returned to the beginning of my strife I engulfed the hardships that life gave me as cronus once did to his childeren in mythology 3 horrid moments in my life, lined up consecuetivly togerther like orions belt in astrology My life could in fact be one-third of the cause for the sudden downfall of the nation's economy I look at the events that happened in my life chronologicly then it dawns on me of the irony no later then when i found a higher power, Did my life take me hundreds of miles away from where it was found This world wanted me to play the role as one of the children who were seen without the capability of sound my life's been frigid and cold, so many stories that would straighten things out for me go untold, they wanna take away the fact that im bold, but would rather see me grow old digging deeper into the hole I took a look into chinese culture, i figured i might be able get things straight by listenin to what confucious said then realized confucious couldnt imagin whats goin on in this world and he could help me since confucious was dead the only thing thats even significant about me is how me and hitler share the same date of birth one hundred years apart, both lives have done so much to burn and scorch the earth, bloody, teardrops shows that my heart runs cold and that there are so many things that i fear not, I know they want me destroyed because the only place that accepts me in this world is a beer spot, Fathers an alcoholic slash pill popper who beats on his children just for the plain fuckin hell of it, so im tellin u bastards how i feel, THIS IS MY LIFE, I AINT TRYIN TO SELL U SHIT HALF YOU CATS PLAY ABOUT THIS TYPE OF LIFESTYLE PLAYIN JEDI MIND TRICKS ON YA LISTENERS BUT IM THE PRODUCT OF TWO SICK ASS MINDS BEING HELD AS A PSYCOLOGICAL PRISONER LIVIN IN A WARZONE OF MY OWN TERMS, I HAVE NO FUCKIN REASON TO MAKE THIS SHIT LONGTERM READY TO FLIP AND KILL MY WHOLE FUCKIN SCHOOL IF SOMEONE SAYS THE WRONG WORDS now do u see why i rap, this shit keeps me sane when my brain goes so far off the fuckin meter, and no matter how hard i try to climb out the whole, the fuckin crevease keeps gettin deeper and deeper... ~Yung Duke~ Nice as verse hells fire and good luck to u too. if i lose, u deserver to win this tourny cause you been comin so close in the last couple. |
my vote is for forgotten his shit was tight and he had ill lines he had crazy vocablary which heused in perfect context good drop
hell fire verse was cool too but he used words out of context and he went so far to that he actually made wors up and u read uwill see such as stabation biblication clogation and bleedation as u will read theres many more but those are just some of them that he actually made up !! |
Forgotten Flow got this with an overall better peice... hells was to basic... this goes to forgoten.... he had better vocab and told a better story
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yo i was gonna post the links for other battles then i realized no one else really looks like they had a battle just one sided...and for the votes on this wicked ya gotta explain ya vote better man sayin that my shit is basic aint gonna help me to ellivate and looks like a bad vote for not listing example....as for spoken i ment to add made up words ya stayed with it enough to see the word play...but thx for the honesty
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Forgotten Flow wins 2-0....
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