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Hemz vs ~Lady Fiya~
Hemz vs. ~Lady Fiya~
Battle Type: Topical Topic = Coping with Amputated Legs 30 Lines MAX No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit Good Luck, 1 day check in and it's due twenty four hours after check in. Minimum posts to vote: 1000 Check in by: 05-10-05 at 07:39 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Hemz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-09-05 07:42 PM.
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~Lady Fiya~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 06:37 PM.
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here, i need an extension.
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Meaning I'll post my verse soon and everyone can vote from this thread. I'll drop today though, hope you make it by today. |
Coping With Amputated Legs *Setting/Realization* Lights flicker above my body, my eyes suddenly open to a wide space I saw my face reflected in the bulb that died out, I can’t recall this place Or which way I entered, I just seen four blank walls… a swinging ivy Right beside me and this white bed, reason why I’m here? It might be That the dream of me having an terrible accident has really happened I told myself I wouldn’t drink last night, how many glasses did I hit? I tried to forget and began to lift my body and felt restraints on my arm Similar to the ones on insane patients, I had a few bruises slightly charred Then my leg had a sudden itch, I shook the sheets off so I can get to it When I glanced down..there was a wrap.. old blood had seeped through it I felt my nerves jerk back and forth, at the bottom half of my missing limb I wanted to get up and woke again, involuntary I screamed nurses can in Grabbed my arms as I yelled “Let me go!” All I heard was my heartbeat Some guy in a light-blue suit entered and gave me a shot giving me peace. …….. *Leaving the Hospital* I spent a week in that room, I was told the situation.. why my legs are gone I thought of how I would never dance again.. how I can’t spend nights alone Doctors gave the ok for me to leave, go to my house in a wheelchair tonight From the original four-wheels I totaled in a horrible accident that one night I can’t drive, my brother takes up my wheelchair wasting a good ten minutes Just to take me home, another 15 minutes to set it back up like the beginning I can’t open the door, I felt like a midget looking up to the door knob.. No reach I have people waiting on me for just about everything, what’s life without feet Every morning I awake to vigorous shaking because my legs still exist in spirit And give me harsh seizures, more medicine given like clockwork to ease feelings I can have to learn to jump on the countertop to get a clean glass just for a drink ...but I reminisce on the day that started it all, driving unconscious I can’t think Of how and why a loving God would let me exist with such a cruel punishment But then again I respect the fact I’m given a second chance so I’mma run with it Lord tell me how do I go out in public again, He says “You have a testimony to tell” I met the devil, the car I put down to the pedal could have sent me straight to hell |
i posted... good luck........................... :thumbup:
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Lady, we need a new battle thread. I don't know this battle system, but I posted an extension request where my verse should have gone. Now if I post it, no one will be able to see it.
So just copy and paste your verse in the new battle thread, and I'll write mine. I'll set it up as soon as you see this and reply, same rules. I'll also get this one closed after you reply. |
aight i'mma post up the new thread you just post your verse tonight.
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you have seen my verse already which i find unfair somewhat but it's cool.. you have til the same time to drop your verse as i did.
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I didn't read it... I swear. No way for u to believe me unless you take my word as a man. I didn't read it.
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aight i set it up already.. 30 minute check-in and don't post in the box.. unless it's your verse.. 1
Good luck. |
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