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gang_star 05-09-05 07:53 PM

AckRite vs gang_star
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-12-05 at 07:53 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-09-05 07:53 PM

gang_star has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-09-05 07:53 PM.

gang_star 05-09-05 07:54 PM

les go accept dis battle and drop ur shit in 15 min 10 lines ill spit first

System 05-09-05 07:58 PM

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-09-05 07:58 PM.

AckRite 05-09-05 08:17 PM

Gang_Star's Quite Herbish...Shake, I Know I Got You Nervous
Lines 'Inherited Cash'?...From Da Looks Dey Appear 'Worthless'
Smack This Kid Wit My 'Fist'....Now He A Real 'Knuckle-Head'
Dis 'Vampire' Got A Period Mouth...Y You Think His 'Teeth-Red'!
Mention Me? Da Cemetary Is Where This Dude Is Meant To Be
& When It Boiled Down To Da Beef..This Herb Forgot The Recipe!
You've Neva Been Great You Aint No Vet MC..Fallin Off Incredibly
Cuz I Live "Life On the Edge"...And He’s "One Step Ahead Of Me"!
How Absurds This Geek?.. Lackluster Plus His Wordings Weak
Light Travels Faster Than Sound…
...........................So He Looked Bright Until I Heard Him Speak!


(1) Vampires Mouths Are Red Cuz They Bite Da Necks Of They Victims
(2) When It Came To Beef, He Fuckin Had No Chance...He 4Got Da Recipe Feel Me?
(3) Da Life On Da Edge Line...Come On Now...Think About It...U'll Get It
(4) I Thought He Was Smart Until He Opened His Mouth...Light Travels Faster Than "SOUND"...Comprende?

gang_star 05-09-05 08:25 PM

yo you say yo ass is ackrite well nigga u wrong
ill boogle yo mind so bad youll be singin da barney theme song/
my rhymes are like common morning glory
ima paraniod u so bad ur gona end up on maury tellin youre life story/
im comin for u nigga so keep yo eyes peeled
my punch lines hit harder than evander holyfield/
im the predator and you da prey
none gonna vote for u cause dis aint bk u cant have it ur way/
my rhymes hit u so hard its like they on juice
i murderedu dawg, u cant take my abuse/

AckRite 05-09-05 08:40 PM

Damn!...........I Wasted Good Bars On You Kid.........If I Woulda Known You Werent Dat Good I Woulda Gave You Some Le-Way

FUCK! Lol

Vote Niggas...And/Or...Bitches

p4ntzistheish 05-09-05 08:58 PM

Voted For: AckRite

-This is an LFS Review-

AckRite

Gang_Star's Quite Herbish...Shake, I Know I Got You Nervous
Lines 'Inherited Cash'?...From Da Looks Dey Appear 'Worthless'

You never cease to impress me wit yur openers

Smack This Kid Wit My 'Fist'....Now He A Real 'Knuckle-Head'
Dis 'Vampire' Got A Period Mouth...Y You Think His 'Teeth-Red'!

Nice meta...nice

Mention Me? Da Cemetary Is Where This Dude Is Meant To Be
& When It Boiled Down To Da Beef..This Herb Forgot The Recipe!

HAHAHAHA

You've Neva Been Great You Aint No Vet MC..Fallin Off Incredibly
Cuz I Live "Life On the Edge"...And He’s "One Step Ahead Of Me"!

Damn....nice

How Absurds This Geek?.. Lackluster Plus His Wordings Weak
Light Travels Faster Than Sound…
...........................So He Looked Bright Until I Heard Him Speak!


AHAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!!NIce ASS CLOSER!

gang_star

yo you say yo ass is ackrite well nigga u wrong
ill boogle yo mind so bad youll be singin da barney theme song

Umm....no

my rhymes are like common morning glory
ima paraniod u so bad ur gona end up on maury tellin youre life story

Try again.

im comin for u nigga so keep yo eyes peeled
my punch lines hit harder than evander holyfield/

Played.

im the predator and you da prey
none gonna vote for u cause dis aint bk u cant have it ur way

Even more played.

my rhymes hit u so hard its like they on juice
i murderedu dawg, u cant take my abuse

Thank God it's over

Overall: Man this is bad...AckRite just take the win...just take it..hell you're probably laughin at the fact you went thru with this lol

L. Veracity 05-09-05 08:58 PM

Voted For: AckRite

wow dude, Gang Star blows cock, lmao...

this shouldn't even need to be explained man, Ack took this to the bank and cashed it in man...best like was "and when it boiled down to the beef, this herb forgot the recipe" that's some shit I've never seen twisted like that before yo...and that closer is straight sikkness...

Gang Star, you used an Evander Holyfield line about punching hard...enough said...

VOTE by a landslide: AckRite

AckRite 05-09-05 09:03 PM

LMFAO @ LFS Sayin "Thank God Its Over"

LMFAO @ L Sayin "Gang Star Blows Cock"


Yall O.D'd.......I Came My Hardest In This Battle........4 No Reason *Pissed*........2-0........Uppin For More Votes

AckRite 05-10-05 11:44 AM

BLOW COCK!!..............Yo Uppin Dis For More Votes Nigras

AckRite 05-10-05 09:33 PM

Vote Upppppppppppppppppppppppppp.................Whats Good Ppl

AckRite 05-11-05 04:18 PM

Uppppppppin Dis Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.....................Vote Up Niggas I Got You On Da RTF

Crazy Hades 05-11-05 04:32 PM

Voted For: AckRite

You were decent. The other guy plain out sucked, so you looked more like a model next to a redneck woman in overalls. One thing I'd like to address I found strange...I saw a quote on bash.org where people are arguing about light and sound, and some guy says 'well, we thought you were bright until you made sounds' or something like that. No real proof, but whatever. Found that strange.

Multis: AckRite
Metas: AckRite
Flow: AckRite
Structure: AckRite
And it's pretty much that one-sided in all categories.

The other guy was just plain out weak.

Vote: AckRite

AckRite 05-12-05 05:18 PM

Ummmmmmmmmm..................Uppin Dis Shit...................Fuckin Vote On It & End It


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