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I Breathe Fire....
3 VeRsEs...No cHoRuS NeEdEd...StRaIgHt kEyStYlE...pEeP AnD RePlY Expose the quarter of the mental, stellar scientific Metaphorically prolific, matters shatter and baffle the most gifted Theories I spit it, linguistics equipped with heiroglyphics Etched on deadened trees, the most vernacularly deprived will miss this Point out any vile instances... Verses hypnotic like aphrodesiacs and sweet boiled or burnt incense-is I travel on continuum rifts in sleep continuously swift To insinuate gifts to keeping eyebrows infinitely on "lift" Blasted my net niche like craters through space ships If your visuals basic, My imaginatives sure to erase its matrix My rhymes replicate like replacements, basically my thoughts multiply In exponential numbers, anonymous murderer by hordes scripting battle lullabies Emcees rarely can compete with my status with the appropriate apparatus, the mind When it comes to my mathematics, break my lines down thoroughly like rocks to crack addicts Eminate light in blackness, Im ill acquainted Conditions unstable enable release of fables cuz my neurological cables can't contain it Leave the net tainted, red painted with blood splashed when the pain gets... Delivered to victims in sizeable proportions leavin brains distorted I gain nothing, no gratification, but leave the sane contorted, with spinals sprained, report it Subjects the same? deported with new ways to attack, cerebellums that lack, the experience to pick up the pieces and react With feesable feedback, emcees defeatable, I cease-wack, empty and repeatable Leave torsos on meat-racks,ready-and-eatable, My mind is the heat-packed, infinitely beat-the-bull... Shit out-of-any, hordes of many entities, gorged a-plenty till the next centuries My net-enemies fret-and-envy the methods displayed mentally readily with pens'n'keys Mere men-to-me, mortal fatalities, cranial cavities drained like batteries, the planet's gravity I bend-with-ease... Livin Legendz represents higher thought and intelligence Negligence deemed irrelevant when the legible elegance is evident Mad enough to fuck up the Union and the Confederate, shit...I'm just arrogant Authentic style of word structure known to batter and bruise muthafuckas Out of luck for thinking I don't splatter crews and significant others Once again hovering the axis chanting "ashes to ashes..." But now the fact is the masses contract this as my last diss Perhaps it's because I'm a madman even more a born tragic An anarchist in a democratic society that exhibits a variety of mathematics Drastic to cranial caverns, catch me dropping science on tables at a local tavern But when you get burned you then have learned the essentials for a healthy life term... Enter the mad-era, my thought process possessed by mmx pentium processors Through the use of the mind these lyrical assassins is articulate oppressors |
uppppppppppin..
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Nice multies. I was feelin this drop and tha whole concept to it. Keep it up. Dope unpredictable rhymes too...9/10
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thanmks fam uppin..
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uppppin disssssss
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multies were hot man vocab was blazin good drop really 8/10..
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tahnks fam uppin....
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Basickally i'd vote dis piece for best open mic if there was a thread...kuz dis was da best open mic i seen so far on RV...Vocab was crazy!...wordplay nice...damn u'd prolly be a good challenge ta battle...im thinken i seen a battle of urs on here...but i dont think it was nothin like this...(really not sure if it was u tho)...but jeah homie big ups on this piece....10/10 good job
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Closed , no link pm me a link if you wish to have this re-opened
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thankyou upppin.... this
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I always hate when people try to show off with needless vocabulary. I'll incorporate some "exotic" words into my poetry, but you don't want it to go over someone's head with it. It's like saying 'if you can't understand this, you're a retard' and they can't respond to the imagery without checking up on about a hundred or so dictionary definitions. Simplicity is sometimes the best way to go.
It's a good drop, though. Nice multis, though it's confusing in a lot of parts. Like I said, imagery and emotion and all that is more important then just blowing people away with vocabulary they don't understand. 8.5/10 --- No hate. |
definitely dope......and if some people cant understand it then it isnt for them.....maybe thats just the way he percieves imagery and emotion because he thinks like that on a regular basis
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Or maybe he's a pseudo-intellectual. o_O Just sayin'.
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lol ta upppinnnnnnnnn
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