Re~Verb vs datopprospect
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-10-05 at 08:59 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Re~Verb has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:31 AM.
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datopprospect has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:32 AM.
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On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/ Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual, And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/ I dun know what dude u heard about, Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/ Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk, Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/ This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/ i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/ put it to where you think you smart=Brain |
This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood" Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"** **i mean closer 2 getha as in our battle records |
This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood" Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"** **i mean closer 2 getha as in our battle records |
shit........
that was close..didnt realize id not posted in the correct box until 30seconds left.lol.... |
Voted For: Re~Verb
da verb winz diz battle for da overral better verse da punchlinez wuz sick da personalz hit hard an da creativity of his bars wuz just much more better so verb getz mih vote on diz battle |
On my verse, i jus noticed a line a messed up, on the couch line it is supposed 2 be
I dun know what dude u heard about, Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like whats in your couch/ |
Voted For: Re~Verb
one word...E-A-S-Y well damn...no need to explain but i got to...here we go... verb: This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance ...lolz...iight opener Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself ...nice one right here Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready ...had me rollin...good Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood" ...OMG!!!...perfect, perfect, perfect...dat won da battle right there Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"** ...cool closer, could have been betta *8/10 spect: On this microphone i can't be beat, i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/ ...not really Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual, And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/ ...quit sayin "mic"...u "typed" dis homie I dun know what dude u heard about, Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/ ...heard dat before Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk, Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/ ...no dats iight...only a porn head would get it This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/ i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/ ...whoa, too damn long...wtf? *5/10 structure: verb flow: verb punches: VERB multis: verb vocab: VERB overall: verb, u really didnt have to come hard at all...spect, yo shit was all over tha place and no punch landed...one sided battle famz... v=re~verb return tha fava when 8 drop his verse...link in sig |
^^aight thas coo............
uppin.................... |
Voted For: datopprospect
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/ yup i watch alot of porn so i was laughing at that line. nice shit original too. reverb came slick tho but ur punches were as effective/ ur flow was better tho. if u need this vote further explained message me. |
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Dang yall i vote on all yall battles can sum1 vote on ours?
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