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Wicked One 05-10-05 06:13 PM

<..8..> vs Wicked One
 
Battle Rules:

6 -12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-12-05 at 06:13 PM

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System 05-10-05 06:33 PM

&lt;..8..&gt; has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 06:33 PM.

System 05-10-05 06:45 PM

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 06:45 PM.

<..8..> 05-10-05 07:36 PM

this guys fake, waitin tah accept tah get more time tah think/
take all the time yah need, i'll drop now cause i came to rob the scene/*
yur whole styles whack, look at yah name, "Wicked" One/
convulsive lier, cause the number of wicked rhymes yah dropped is none/**
if you read the whole dictionary, i still doubt you'd be an ill rhymer/
Even if yah got signed tah "Ca$h Money", yah wouldn't be a "Big Tymer"/***
you gettin ripped by this considerably greater competitor/
rappin is not yur thing, don't believe what yah dick ridin friends said tah yah/****

<..8..> 05-10-05 07:37 PM

shit i forgot to put my explanations in it. damn, what evah i don't really think their needed

Wicked One 05-11-05 10:37 PM

Homicidal tendencies tenderize your flesh with God's aggresion...
I top this session take your life just to stop your proggression...
U'd be the reason for the world dieing, I guess that's an act too...
Shit americans would praise bin laden, if they kidnapped u...
And I'm done with this fan, don't have me rip out ur fucking heart...
Cause ur ryhme books undeveloped, like concept art...
Son u'll never be hot, I'll beat cause I'm known to throw spears...
And ur known to throw punches, only from ur birth year...
So go back to boards, come up with another wack scheme...
Cause I'm super and I got the X-factor, like the mutherfucking team...
You lost this so head back to hanging out with them LA city kids...
And go be a poster boy for one of P Diddys hits...

<..8..> 05-12-05 04:52 PM

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Wicked One 05-12-05 06:17 PM

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Wicked One 05-12-05 10:45 PM

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<..8..> 05-13-05 01:00 AM

vote...........................................???

Wicked One 05-14-05 08:36 PM

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M-Eazy 05-15-05 01:39 AM

Voted For: Wicked One

I think wicked one took this one with better structure first off, then way harder punches. 8's whole verse was just a bunch of rhymes. Only thing that seemed like it couldve been a descent punch was that cash money and big tymer line, but that was still wack and worded poorly. I give my vote to wickone. He made a better atempt at taking this. You started off strong, but then you fell off near tha end. Elevate on that, but you took this one in my opinion.

M-Eazy 05-15-05 01:42 AM

rtf on this

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Wicked One 05-15-05 01:32 PM

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Armada Da 187 05-15-05 04:36 PM

Voted For: &amp;lt;..8..&amp;gt;

votin for 8


ight 8 got this due to harder punches n way better metas

8

ya punches were ight a lil bit soft but in a way were creative
Ya personals i only seen one in it was pretty creative man
Ya metaphors were creativew and hard hittin, they got u myt vote

meta:
if you read the whole dictionary, i still doubt you'd be an ill rhymer/
Even if yah got signed tah "Ca$h Money", yah wouldn't be a "Big Tymer"/
(lol creative, hard hittin)

nice personal
yur whole styles whack, look at yah name, "Wicked" One/
convulsive lier, cause the number of wicked rhymes yah dropped is none
(nice n creative)

ya had good flow and a descent strucutre it was easy to keep with so props o ya verse

Wicked
Ya punches were pretty descent some hard others wernt
it seemed like u wernt comin hard but more of a guilty sorta of verse, ya punches were sorta out there man
ya personals- i didnt really notice anything hard from you on this category
Ya metas- not very hard, they were creative but not hard enough
multies- didnt see any so elevate on those
ya had a good strucutre which was followed by a good flow so props on that

get a lil harder on punches and personals man

both elevate on personlas and multies

descent battle

v/8........... Better Metas, Personals



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