Weedman
 

who?................... who?.................... who?...................... AX to da D. O. Double G

(Intro)
Roll it.... Light it.... then blow the smoke in the sky.... (x2)

(Hook)
The streetz is callin
ma niggaz is ballin
My hoes be smokin
My Foe's be choakin
WEEDMAN gon take u bitches home
WEEDMAN has come to brake ur bones
WEEDMAN gots the weed, ain't no lie
WEEDMAN gots the weed, lets get high

Lets get hiiiiiiiiiigh

(Verse 1)
I used to pick on my bitches on a green cadillac
a lil bit of change now that the ol' kool is back
kinda da same cuz now's a green escalade
errtime I jump on da street iz jus like a parade
don't get the wrong Idea, I ain't no killah
Ain't ax no more, Itz WEEDMAN da Drug dealer
I can sell u drugs, come to me cappisshh
why I'm high all day? I have weed on my dish
fuck pizza, fuck mc donalds, I'm only in grass
the business, fun always, big money, big grass
then I got them crome 26's, rimz spinnin
and I do sell drugs to da children, call me Drug Demon
don't matter blck, white or even chinese
I'm in every street, like the pot desease
don't blame me, I'm only the seller, blame da do'
I hear em sayin "I want weed get me sum mo'"

(Hook)
The streetz is callin
ma niggaz is ballin
My hoes be smokin
My Foe's be choakin
WEEDMAN gon take u bitches home
WEEDMAN has come to brake ur bones
WEEDMAN gots the weed, ain't no lie
WEEDMAN gots the weed, lets get high

Lets get hiiiiiiiiiigH

this was farrly basic...it didnt domuch for being so short...try different vocab or words to liven things up....6.5/10..rtf in my sig...ALL OR I WILL NEVER RTF BACK ON YOU EVER!

ok... lol..... thanks for the feedback

yea this was pretty basic

nuthin overly creative.......the flow and structure was on point and shit

overall i think it was aight, too short though to

i give it 6/10

return the favour on my new OM "I Wanna Be......"

hahaha thanks fo that but i think it deserved a 7/10... it ain't that bad...

or is it??????

ye this is kinda good

actually this wasnt anything really...
whats with the lack of creativity n the gansta
writtens, its a cliche ax dogg.......get creative...
try using wordplay n decent original metas...
your ryhme scheme fell off bad in some areas too
.lol, i doubt solo even read it...lol
flow was on point...ya right,...lmfao

I'll keep up my shit... thanks fo tha feedback, ama return tha favor