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"I Wanna Be........."
Yeah, I was bored and keyed up a quick OM for ya........ I wanna be a rap star so I can get money when my album goes platinum… I wanna be a pimp so I can line up hoez, powder my hand ‘n’ be slappin ‘em… I wanna be a fireman so I can ride in the fire truck and slide down poles… I wanna be a stripper so I can dance and get dollars put down my clothes… I wanna be a judge so I can bang hammers and send people straight to jail… I wanna be a retail worker so I can have that pleasure of making a sale… I wanna be a hacker so I can crack files and repair computer glitches… I wanna be a porn star so I can get paid money to constantly fuck bitches… I wanna be a movie star so I can be on the big screen ‘n’ have clans of fans… I wanna be a construction worker so I can help create buildings from plans… I wanna be a gambler so I can bet on shit and collect loads ‘n’ loads of cash… I wanna be a loan shark so I can take them non-payers and beat on their ass… I wanna be an alcoholic so I can spend all day throwing back those beers… I wanna be a comedian so I can crack jokes and have people laughing tears… I wanna be a casino owner so I can laugh as people lose all their money… I wanna be a clown so I can make a fool of myself cuz I think it wud be funny… I wanna be a race car driver so I can rip it in them super-charged cars… I wanna be an astronaut so I can jump in a shuttle and venture into the stars… I wanna be the president so I can live my life up in the White House… I wanna be a dentist so I can take tools and shove ‘em in ya mouth… I wanna be a gangsta so I can roll with guns and blast hoez who attack me… I wanna be a drug addict so I can feed my need for weed and crack G… I wanna be a social worker so I can help get better lives for abused kids… I wanna be an auctioneer so I can put up goods and have people make bids… I wanna be a murderer so I can cut people up and have myself a killing spree… But mostly I wanna be me and just see where life decides to take me… LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190252 |
ye... you beat me on tha creativity.... the structure was good dawg..... vocab 9 of ten
and yo whole shit, Get it a 9 out of 10 too.. pc out homeboy |
feed bitchez feed............................
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ye this was a 6/10 because your vocab didn´t show a lot that of sayin I wana be again and again gets to be a pain on the ass after readin 6 lines, but it wuz good after all
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werd, nice little drop here solo, a poetic feel to it
probably go good in poetic scriptures as well as here reminds me of jacks om "metaphorically speakin" . lol@ herbs givin a 6/10.... |
humpin the shit outta this bizzle bitch!!!!
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yo i liked this peace... nice structure and flow and shit.. mayne good work keep it up
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