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CounTREE Jay 05-11-05 03:18 AM

@. vs Poetical Sex Wizard
 
Poetical Sex Wizard vs. @.

Crhyme Sindicate vs. 6 Feet

Topical Battle

Topic:

On Death Row

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes (Includes The Establishment and The Council)
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 05-14-05 at 03:18 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

La Cosa Nostra 05-11-05 05:01 AM

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I bet you a textee came up with this played topic..

System 05-13-05 11:34 AM

@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 11:34 AM.

System 05-14-05 03:13 AM

Poetical Sex Wizard has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 03:13 AM.

Whys That? 05-14-05 06:06 AM

Diary of a deathrow inmate

The first sign of gloom

Dear diary...

Walls of white surround my exsitence,echos of hate fill my new life
while many seem resentfull I notice some enjoy this with spite
everyone looks grim like they all caught a contagious flue of death
lungs feel collapsed, afraid to take the devils breath
visual's seem bleak,alot of manufactured feelings are felt
I feel like a 45 year old man but abortion's been delt
tormenting chants fill the air while an ery silence fills my mind
tryna visualize my future yet regret whats been left behind
a small glimps thru a window allows the sight of smoldering rain
I strongly carry myself on my back to shoulder the pain
with the shakiest steps I move thru the halls arradiatted voice
Malfunctioning words,separating thoughts,my mind has eliminated choice



4 by 4
Dear diary
I've Slowly energised hate for solitary confinement
I wanted to learn alot before I die,Im excepting deaths my only assignment
expeditions are mearly lethargic walks in a square circle
Accurant accounts of the terror screams can be heard virtual
re-cooperating isnt possible,with bible strong in hand I wait for my escape
It will soon be time to strip my body of sin like death is my rape
the light is dull I try create some brightness with excessive alliteration
echos of silence are amplified by agressive reverberation





Deaths walk
Dear Diary


Exuasting thoughts race faster than exstatic lightning
Im some what calm,I predicted it to be more frightning
with hands cuffed behind my back I walk my final emotion
split mind,shit reminds me like de-ja-vu devosion
My throat feels harsh like my osophegus is locust infested
Mind astray,I cant find the day that I originally got arrested
Passing other cells,smiles start to dwell,everyone thinks im going to hell
face pale like the thraox has summond me to eternal damnation
Unsure if this is a positive day,filth gone?, like reversed contamination
I observe a man is placing my destiny in the middle of deaths circumference


Destiny
Dear Diary

Deaths is certain,my breath is hurtin the second they raise murders curtain
As they start reading my biblical scripture, I take a quick glance around
If this was a ball room I guess the next dance is hell
Contemplating why have I seen this before,maybe in my dreams?
Im not saying a word,yet the noise I hear are my screams
Un-doublty I have served this punishment in previous time
A hear a gaurd say "it wont be painfull" , Im not beliving his lie
laying back,im praying that power surges strengthen me to break these chains
"Is it possible to pretend to die? I doubt I can fake these pains
The lever is like an evil snake it raps electricity round a remorsefull soul
The conducter is heartless,he doesnt mind that murder's his goal
with one last body shake,a ghostly break isnt mostly fake
Deaths number has struck seven time more than the wattage of electricity
As I sit back and relise what ive just written and witnessed explicitly
Im in shock not only from the 100watts of power but from my personnal conclusion
Im mearly a ghost writting a diary about my own deathrow excacution



@. aka Ysdat.........

La Cosa Nostra 05-15-05 08:38 AM

Girl I write this letter to you by myself, cold in my cell..
I think I'm going insane, locked up my heads swollon aswell..
With no one to tell, my agony.. Haters constantly after me..
I continue casually, to live on-- throughout this fallacy..
I told you before I left-- my feelings are real ofcoarse..
I wanna hold you for eternity, and maybe even more..
Its undescribable, the feeling of love inside of my mind..
At the time, the only thought other than her, was of me dying..
In 1 year, I'm counting breath after breath, show me a sign..
Has god forgotton me, did I make a wrong move-- down the line..
See baby one promise I'd never break, is I'ma find..
One last chance to be with you, we need to spend some time..
Before I leave to fly to paradice.. I wanna have those talks with you.................I wanna summer afternoon so I can walk with you..
But my flaws being stuck in prison death row, its hard to breathe..
Hard to see a way to vacate, the stone and steel beams..
..So it seems all I got is my dreams..


What you achieve while you inhabit this earth..
Is what ya worth..
Dont get stuck doing a bid..
And ruin your life from stupid shit you did as a kid..
The chair was peaceful.....
One picture in my mind..
Me and you, old on a porch..
Unfortunatly though ..I ran out of time..
Dont cry olivia I love you,

..but this is goodbye..

Whys That? 05-15-05 01:55 PM

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~Babylon~ 05-15-05 03:38 PM

This was feedback posted for @.
 
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La Cosa Nostra 05-15-05 09:31 PM

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I need to go merk someone now..

50Cal. 05-16-05 10:35 AM

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Whys That? 05-16-05 01:46 PM

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josh654789 05-16-05 09:31 PM

This was feedback posted for @.
 
your jawnt was pretty nice. i liked it. good job..

Ysdat 05-17-05 03:29 AM

This was feedback posted for @.
 
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Whys That? 05-18-05 07:08 AM

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