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......................To Whom it may Concern....................... I Close my eyes...and i see these same Visions in my Dreamins And they Triculate through my Mind...Like whats the Meanins? I Know for sure im not Skitzo?..But i can Feel the Devil Waitin As Soon as i Entered the Building i felt the Trial and Tribulation That My Fate and Freedom were being Vigourasely ..Re-Voked No Lookin to the Court for Support...Jus the Typical Ne-Gro'd They More than Likely Considered Me Ass..But Not my Freedom Towards Superior Justice as if im a King inside a 6 x 9 Kingdom ..............................Dear Judge............................. Please Explain to the Jury that My Image is not SelfishNess But i Devoured that Mans Life ..In Pure Acts of SelfDefense And Im far from a Savage..Just Because i Rhyme..Im Not Lavish But my Image is Dimmend and My Trust worthyness is Damaged I swear at least 80 Percent that i will Devote all to Repentense BUT how can i Grow & Learn when my Will is Killed and Diminished So aslong as you Continue to Provide those 3 feedings i Complain And with this Comensary of 50$ tell me how a Con..Main.Tains .............................Dear Guard Thomas........................ I Honestly can Admit that through these 10 yrs of Bull Shit that you Have my Back through it all and U im only Coo With Every Since April 20th when you Helped Me Evade those Knifes That were being Dangerously Thrown attempting to take my Lifes But you Quickly Dis Engaged the Lights and Turnt it into Night With jus enough time to Remove me....The time was jus Right But i still Coco Butter my Scars..Behind these Bars yes its Hard i Remember you Saying Half of these Men are Softer than Lard And Yes i Promise MR.Thomas that i will Remember your Lessons And when you Retire..And your Jobs up for Hire.. I still to this vERY day will Constantly Remember your Blessings .............................Dear Lord...................................... You Let these Crackers in the System come and Snatch Me 25 Yrs..Ive did 50 So Far so please Add ...Whats the Math Be? BUT its Nothing....your My Lord..so how can i hold Grudges But i kno the Devil is Behind this...i Listen to all my Nudges Jus Trust this...My Bible is More Powerfull than my Sentence I will Continue to Live for you Until the you Decide to Fire Me from Life..Like the Apprentice I can feel my SOUL levatateing..slowly into these Revalations BUT promise.....promise..Promise that in the End ...After being thru Tribulations that i will Never see the Devil Waitin Ever again...Because my Life is Over and im Running out of Patience |
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Thats deep...sumwhat like a testament of sum sort!!
I like tha few multis..but it had alot of emotion in it. this line caught my attention"I can feel my SOUL levatateing..slowly into these Revalations BUT promise.....promise..Promise that in the End ...After being thru Tribulations that i will Never see the Devil Waitin Ever again...Because my Life is Over and im Running out of Patience" ^^^that was erieeeeEEE!!!^^^ I just wanna know if ur bout tah commit suicide or sumthan other than that it was tight!!!...like virgin pussy!! keep goin! |
lol...naw man ..jus showin my deep skillz thats all kid
thnx 4 the luv bump............... |
This is a dope, heartfelt, well spoken poem man, you captured a lot of emotion in this piece, you definately have gotten better at portraying you're thoughts onto paper...good shit all around, some minor spelling issues but not bad that the reader can't understand you or what you tried to say, i was feeling this, keep dropping.1
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4sho....that means alot comin from the queen of rv Poetry
u down 4 a collab soon? thought you hated me, yea, i'll do a collab, holla at me with a topic..i'll have it for you asap~FLUID |
Niceness. Could you post your verse, man?
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i dont know if you saw my edited post in your reply up there^^ but if you think of a topic,pm me..i'll be back on tomorrow at some point :thumbup:
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U can think of a topic
i can write 2 anything |
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dis was real dope; i was actually feelin dis one:) i dunno but i felt some emotion; dis came from da heart(dats wat i got from it); damn pa keep up da good work...1
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