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Mr. Hahn vs Kein Witz
Battle Rules: 10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topical Battle Topic: The Creation of The Universe Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-14-05 at 07:07 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Mr. Hahn has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 07:07 PM.
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Kein Witz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 08:07 PM.
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][ Gah. This'll be a weird one...don't like the topic much, but okay. ][
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A chalk outline surrounding infinite time and space, A vast state of grace with fragments of dust and nothingness lingering into illustration and vanity forever stuck in this obscurity someone had to stop the insanity First there was a chilling freefall of mass minerals staggering situations rated sprawling passed sinical adverse fate struck the radiance as it burst with rage and suited protest space divided creation and beyond age was purpose new world zephyrs frozen in distance let forth new world ambitions outgrowth swayed at the fingertips of existence & followed unfurled traditions next came two lights prevailing life upon the cosmos one light ruling the day and another taking control of nights polyphonic prose In my own illustration with the remnants of delay I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise In my own illustration with the remnants of delay I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise |
A chalk outline surrounding infinite time and space, A vast state of grace with fragments of dust and nothingness lingering into illustration and vanity forever stuck in this obscurity someone had to stop the insanity First there was a chilling freefall of mass minerals staggering situations rated sprawling passed sinical adverse fate struck the radiance as it burst with rage and suited protest space divided creation and beyond age was purpose new world zephyrs frozen in distance let forth new world ambitions outgrowth swayed at the fingertips of existence & followed unfurled traditions next came two lights prevailing life upon the cosmos one light ruling the day and another taking control of nights polyphonic prose In my own illustration with the remnants of delay I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise In my own illustration with the remnants of delay I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise |
Okay so i write sloppy, the last post wasnt suppose to be there lol and the last bar wasnt suppose to be there either >.<
Oh well... theres my drop :hump: |
The air smelled of incense, rosemary, expectations immense;
melodrama choked the air, almost scary, building suspense. Hands like clever mice, working the tools with feverish fingers, arms drenched in congealed grease, a sawdust smell lingers. His arms were frail, breathing shallow, watching his creation. countenance pale, wisps of gray hair trembling in expectation. A twisted figure lay infront of him, limbs in irregular positions. Its hair was crudely trimmed, arms risen in simple submission. His fists balled, perspiration a pool in which he was immersed, another creation flawed, just another product of the universe. |
Uppin' this piece...let's get some votes here, guys.
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yeahh uppin for the night...
i messed up my verse double posted and what not... that last bar aint spose to be there either |
This was feedback posted for Mr. Hahn
checkin the polls...lets go Hahn-izzle lol...yu got thisone lol
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Voted For: Kein Witz
yours gets the win....seemed better to me personally. |
This was feedback posted for Mr. Hahn
polls.............................................
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What the hell kind of bs vote is that?
Break it down or it isnt counting |
Uppin'...please explain votes. You can get that disqualified if you want, Hahn.
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