![]() |
Cassius_Clay vs Retrospecktive
Battle Rules: 6 - 10 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-12-05 at 07:29 AM Must drop verse in 800 minutes after check in. |
Cassius_Clay has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 09:50 PM.
|
Retrospecktive has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 09:50 PM.
|
Allready got the jacks kid, get back when u only can shit luck I put my Automatik to ya Belly make u quick to do "Sit-Ups" So how ya feel huh, I never ever stare but hell yeah i rob I can make ya life short & send u down closer then when u* swear 2 god Im Fairly odd but rare to slob, Nigga nasty allways Stay on ya knees And i can get a " Red " fist in ya face quicker then the second letter of Abc's* *lastline: B's=Bloods *4thline: The bible says not to swear on anything holy god is holy .... Uhh yeah w/e its all blah of a spit ~1~ |
Aiight..He wanna fight... Ill knock out this kids grill!!
This kid real? He said it himself"he aint no Big Deal!!" He ah bit ill?.. cuz he fucks wit both sex? Or he likes his throat wet?...iit sure aint his verse's its like he dropped em' out of Vo-tech's(text..G.e.D!) Kid be serious..ur ah ghost from tha past that should be kept there like you postin ur ass!! This dude keep promotin tho...like he better than me How!! when he get emotional....like what he said on Degree!! U ah wanna be... u should be shaking my hand instead..... Ur Comin up with no punches like fred fightin ness on making the band Quick text..real battle shit..fuck waitin!!! holla! |
Aiight..He wanna fight... Ill knock out this kids grill!!
This kid real? He said it himself"he aint no Big Deal!!" He ah bit ill?.. cuz he fucks wit both sex? Or he likes his throat wet?...iit sure aint his verse's its like he dropped em' out of Vo-tech's(text..G.e.D!) Kid be serious..ur ah ghost from tha past that should be kept there like you postin ur ass!! This dude keep promotin tho...like he better than me How!! when he get emotional....like what he said on Degree!! U ah wanna be... u should be shaking my hand instead..... Ur Comin up with no punches like fred fightin ness on making the band Quick text..real battle shit..fuck waitin!!! holla! |
good drop probly won who gives ashit tho lol i aint even tryin against ya newbie self...
|
....................uppppin....................... ...........
|
......Upppin...................................... .....................
|
Voted For: Cassius_Clay
Retro- Flow was ok, punches were alright, good structure, certain lines were more creative than others Cassius- Punches and personals hit harder, though i dont like your structure, flow was ok... Punches---Cassius Flow--- Retro Personals--- Cassius Metaphors--- Cassius Wordplay--- Retro Structure--- Retro Creativity--- Tie Final Vote----Cassius http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=190479 |
Voted For: Retrospecktive
:roll: Aii This is what It is Ret Basically becuase your structure was cleaner and your verse atleast came with an attempted punch I hvae to give you my vote I dont know wtf cassius clay was talkin bout and his structure was fucked up and hi ryme sceme was Jus .......NVMD so i am jus statin that you stole this battle Man DO Me a Favor and RTF ...In The Battles in my sig Please CC aii Man To Start Off why Would you have averse where your lines did this: ************************************* **** ^^^^ Thats very sloppy man I dont think that verse made any sense and then when you were ryming your word jus repeated therslef basically and you didnt diss your oppene you jus had some self glorification which is not the object of a battle so you need to work on that seriuosly man NO HATE |
Quote:
^^^thats hatin period..U dont know what Im talkin bout!!,man they need ta erase this vote 4 real,my shit had more personals an erythang an plus dude said it himself(you hatin 4 real) you didnt breakdown anything you just came wit sum bullshit!!^^^ but hey thanx 4 ur opinion anyways....good battle dawg...still uppin!! |
uppiin............................................ ............
|
This was feedback posted for Cassius_Clay
i thought both jawnts was alright...cassius gets the W though....
|
Voted For: Cassius_Clay
YEAH YEAH SON WHY IS U BATTLING DIS WEAK NIGGA BUT U NEED TO BE MORE CREATIVE |
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:54 AM. |