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BiZzO 05-12-05 04:30 AM

My Son Richard...
 
I love Richard, my son is my pride and joy
His cute little face, while he plays with his toys
He says 'I love you Daddy' with excitement in his voice
'Vroom Vroom' with his little trucks he makes noise
Only 3 years old, but he is my complete everything
How many little rascals do I treat like a king?

Bright blue eyes, freckles, he's my little man
Twelve years old getting in trouble with his clan
I love him sooo much, thats why I ground him
Thinking how do I live with him, or without him?
He stresses me out, but I still love him infinite
Since the day I teared at his birth theres been no regret

He's nineteen years old now and heading to college
I'm so proud of how well he used up my wallet
He took me into a seperate room so none knew
Said "Dad I wouldn't be here if it weren't for you"
A tear from his eye he said "Just saying thanks
You gave me a lot even when little was in the banks"

Hes very handsome, now thirty five years old
Has a beautiful wife Jen that he treats like gold
He's a fire fighter and he's saved many lives
People crying with him saying "I owe you my life"
His Daughter Aaron is now such a lucky girl
So much smiles and love that brighten up her world

So much memories in my heart are now recorded
Then I stopped daydreaming realising he was aborted

BiZzO 05-12-05 05:09 AM

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BiZzO 05-13-05 01:51 AM

uppin this.......

Murdah.txt 05-13-05 02:11 AM

Ohhh Deep Shit Homie That Was Dopeness Good Flow Rymes Vocab Good Drop Fam

BiZzO 05-13-05 02:18 AM

thanks man.. upping.. this

M-Eazy 05-13-05 10:30 AM

Deep shit. Needs more views. That's a bitch. But this shit is nice. Kinda poetry type. I was feeling it. 9/10

Oz™ 05-13-05 03:40 PM

wuldnt all that...couldve gotten deaper with it...weak vocab if ur usin this type of writing...and u couldve made it longer...

5/10

stay up


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