$Upstate$ vs mookie
 

Battle Rules:

10- UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-13-05 at 01:22 AM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

$Upstate$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 07:25 PM.

(I hate to break you cuz but someone got to aHA)

Cmon cuz,stop rite now youll get clapped, ya jabs aint right to go up and swing yet/
On RV ya mouth is as big as a bass trout,and in reality niggas catch your ass like fish nets/
and yeah ive been searchin on ya history on RV/
and i love the way you took half the lyrics that belong to me/
and the battle against dron i love the way you took my last line and switched it around/
and in the other battle with robkilla you got your ass skunked 5-0 yous the fuckin RV clown/
this nigga swears so hard he was born and raised in the ATL/
this nigga was raised in idaho and told me not to tell nobody shit i wont tell/
tell this niggas on RV how you get boo'd at talent shows and how niggas get on ya tabs/
on dont let me tell the RV niggas bout how them pinchers start pinching and you caught the crabs/
and however i beat you still to blind to see/
my lyrics will eat ya michelle "branch" rhymes up and no matter what youll always be under me when it comes to the family "tree"/

mookie has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-05 07:59 PM.

>>you bout to get hurt lol<<

You might as well say when it come to rhymes im a cook cookin 3 course meals/
and you my next meal gettin chopped and grilled/
you garbage you need to be thrown away/
cause ill take this gat and ya head ill blow away/
give it up cuz you dont stand a chance/
ill merk u you aint ready to dance/

hahahahahahaha i told yall he be takin rhymes this is how he really rap aha man call the doctor can we get some votes you didnt even go 10 lines haha

yo we need some votes here

Voted For: $Upstate$

mookie:
wtf is that????
no flow, no structures, one bad punch.. not even a punch, preeskul rap

$upstates$:
you killed here
errthing was good except your structure, but the thing was that... this shit was too much for that nigga na' mean... lol

This was feedback posted for $Upstate$
 

like your rhymes....if i was votin i would give this one to you.

ayo could use some votes for this battle it been up to long

ayo could use some more votes

This was feedback posted for $Upstate$
 

i think it was a hott rap.........................

Voted For: $Upstate$

mookie- unda da line limit
u spossed 2 spit 10 - unlimited u only spit bou 5
ur structure wuz fucked, punches wuz shit n errthang else wuz pretty basic
u need 2 really elevtae n read a rules
2/10
elevateeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


$upstate$- easy win 4 u ur punches were iight but u came pretty basic herre as well, nuffin 2 nice that had me sayin"oooooooo" nahmean n e way u need 2 elevate also, ur structure wuz fucked as well n u need 2 stop tryin 2 cram 2 many lyrics in 1 line. Work on ya strucure n rhymes. Come up wit mo lyrical diction n jus keep ELEVATIN!!!!
5/10

pretty wack battle but ima have tah give dis 1 tah $UPSTATE 4 comin harder wit betta shit

my v/$UPSTATE$

PLEASE RTF ON DA BATTLE IN MAH SIG WIT AN HONEST VOTE
.............THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

Voted For: $Upstate$

Diz Wuz 2 EZ 2 Judge, Vote Has 2 Go 2 Update, Much Better Verse Yo, No Hate 2 Da Homeboy Mookie, But I Really Dont Need 2 Explain Why He Won!

Plz Hit Up Da Battlez In Mah Signature

Voted For: $Upstate$

Okay. This was pretty bad as a battle. But, seeing as how mookie had like four lines that plain out SUCKED. Most of what he did was a flex. I guess...Upstate TRIED some personals. Had OKAY punches...

Still, it's unanimous. They should go screening people to see how good they are before they're validated because people like mookie.

v/ Upstate

- P.S. Mind voting in one of the battles in my sig? -