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Valor 05-12-05 11:40 PM

The War
 
enjoy.....


The Beginning
my mind is focused, determined to destroy
my soldiers, my first infantry is already deployed
with out a care, or even lust in there thoughts
minds are focused, like that of artificial robots
hearts broken, ready to do as I tell
terminate the enemies, send them deep into hell
we shall not fail, hit all targets as located
show no remorse, for the asswholes are hated
war is terrible I know, trust me I do hate this
IM not wrong, my people, I did not mistake shit
why do they think.....
that they can erase other's lives and get away with it?
in time we will know, the reasons will be revealed
even though i grief over the fact, some will be killed
i hope they are thrilled, what's done is now done
i will not quit, until this war i believe we have won



The AfterMath
two years since we deployed, the war has now ended
victory was served, we stand fewer than we began with
not sure how many would remain, since the day we arrived
i now cry for the families, who's loved one's lost there life
in this hell whole, that i now regret has ever happened
but i smile for the bastard's who died....
living there life, trying hard to leave our nation saddened

Featured for a week, for realness-FLUID

Valor 05-15-05 04:29 AM

upping..........

Valor 05-16-05 09:29 PM

upping again...

fluidmoon 05-16-05 09:50 PM

This was dope, true words man, i cant even believe how true this is, your words are unmistakable and real.......great emotion and for our times real...featured piece, because people forget how real..1

Sweft 05-17-05 08:30 PM

and let the truth be spoken!

Nice shit man, thats whats up.

Sweft 05-17-05 08:37 PM

..and you have to drop a link..


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