Young Blaze vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
No Hate

Crew Battle: Illunatikz vs OG

gl to both: 4 days to check, 3 to drop (if you know show you will be labeled gay)

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-17-05 at 03:04 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 04:26 PM.

Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...

*His sig. says "blazin mcs"
**His bio says Jerzy's Finest and everyone makes fun of Jersey about being the worst place in America

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 01:02 PM.

IGHT check the Punchs......TIKZ Bitch

Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

lets go OSB.....checkin polls.....OG running shit like escapin terds

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB VERSE:

Blaze is a joke, sayin you dope? HAHAHA! spare me ya liar,
You couldn't blaze up MC, if you lit Mariah Carey on fire,*
Nice opener. I was feeling tha punch, and I liked the wordplay

Not a rapper, hes an actor, that ain't a factor of this win,
Your 'rap's blow'.. like throwin candy wrappers in the wind,
Nice mini multi here. Not too much of a diss, but I was feeling this

This grimey cat can try and rap but i have to decide hes crap,
Biiitch.. It ain't a question when I start saying 'Y.B. wack',
hahaha. I see some consistency in yo verse. Nice shit

I'm on the 'ball', and 'swingin on' me wouldn't 'strike' me back,
Comin at me? You better 'Check' ya head man.. like wearin a Nike hat,
Flawless punch. Nice wordplay also.

B;aze place a punch because it takes a bunch to make me budge,
And homie you are Jerzy's Finest? Haha... Well thats not saying much,**
Not that hard right here. Just ight to me/[b]

Ayo man , I highly doubt when i post the verse that your drop'll remain,
Cuz you couldn't make anyone 'say-damn' if they spotted hussein...
[B]Dopeness. Nice punch. Nice wordplay. Creative

This was a real creative verse. I liked the punches, and I liked the consistency in your verse. I think yo structure was on point, and yo verse flowed well. I was really into this verse. Dopeness






Young Blaze verse

Like Griffey I hit far,Smashin The windows of yah bitch car
Cause I’m Quick to Throw Away One’s like Im at a Strip Bar
Nice 2nd line, but I don’t know about the first one. A half descent opener

Punches got this lame "Dead from texture" ya layed on Stretchers
Stainless Blessed ya,tossin "O’s in the trash" like Snoop Protestors
Dope. I liked the multies here also.

Best Spits,Osb Getting More “Snores Then Rest Pits” Its “Restless”
“Storms Drench Cliques” Blaze puts “Money On This Rape” Like “Porn Investments”
Descent. Not that hard hitting to me, just nice

In text I’m ill so if you wanna test my skill..no chance for wins
you'll get 'Laid to waste kid' like havin Sex in Bins
Nice. Kinda worded off because it didn’t flow too well, but nice

Respect or victory u aint Havin none,unless u wanna blow vets
Cuz u better be 'runnin for cover' like Marathon Events for The
Homeless...
Dope ass bar, but I don’t see too much consistency

U Weak…cant Even Press my bars wit weight benchs..
Heat Dug yah trenchs.Cuz yah win rate lower than shaqs freethrow Percentage…. (5-5 50%)
Dope ender.

This was a pretty good verse in my opinion. A lot of soft punches in here though. You didn’t have too much consistency. For the most part, yo structure was on point, and yo verse flowed, and it made sense, but I didn’t really see too many dope punches that made me want to give you the win.

overall, I liked this battle. Pretty descent, but I felt OSB came off a lil harder with punches and shit. He also came with a lil more consistency in this one, and I was feelin his verse more. My verse goes to OSB because overall, I felt he came a lil harder in this one. No hate to either one of you. Good battle. Keep elevating.


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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

hmmm...........OSB, nice verse, word

young blaze, self glored waaaaaaaay too much....shaq freethrow lines have quickly become played......had one decent line though.......that homeless one, haha,


word.......OSB.......you almost the man....right now.....you're probly just an, or ma.....or even mn


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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

checkin polls..........good drop both..but i feel OSB's better

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Hot ass battle...Probably gonna be close...Checkin dem polllssss

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

CHECKIN POLLS for my boy OSB, nah mean

uppin for OSB...btw i had something funny to say but...i forgot lol...so fuck it...lol