RapVerse.com Community - Reloaded Pt.1

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Im a don on ma A-game, pimpin with a straight cane/
Rolling Vechs with a great name, You broke begging for a days pay/
You laid off for smacking your gums, cuz they be clappin they guns/
You mad cuz you flipped out a run, bitch movements all out in some/
Wishin to get wasted with rum, but all the ounces is one... (SOFT!)/
...I roll with a family, No wait, a Familia/
That'll lean you like Piza, tax you like a Visa/
Run whole hammers like a pita, At rich niggas wit nokias.../
...Im talking about those High class, who wanna pass, who gotta crash/
a pile of cash, For a lil' ass, with wallet blast, it'll never last, thats juss tha facts/
You gotta know, you gonna fold.../

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It was hot. I like your wordplay a lot. cuz you make sence out of what you are saying not many do.

not very good,flow was unorganised,very monotonous subject matter,multis wren't used enough and punches didn't come hard enough,keep writing though man

that was hot....Tino u gettin there u gonna get big one day

but da part i like was:"Im talking about those High class, who wanna pass, who gotta crash/
a pile of cash, For a lil' ass, with wallet blast, it'll never last, thats juss tha facts/"
nice multi's

hurry up n do pt.2 nigga