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_JooKsta_ vs Bonecollector
Battle Rules:
8 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-14-05 at 01:48 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
_JooKsta_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 12:49 AM.
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Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 12:51 AM.
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i spit barz,plus murder wit da chrome-projecter...merk ya closest of kin now u can really be a BoNe-CoLLeCtor... u wanna challenge,imma give u da 5th...go head shoot yaself kuz u n0t fuckin wit this... and dont tell me u a ThuG when u SwiTch-iN-SkiRts...i'll pull dat hamma back,klap! n leave u TwiTcHin-in-DiRt... ya writens is worth-less,not even close ya per-fect...how u Ckripin but i always see u High stepin wit pur-ses?... BoNe aint a threat like da taco-bell-dog...he AiNt PuShiN CraCK,how when dis pato*-fell-off?...lol imma off em,put a stop to his winnin-spree...and since he a CkrAb* dis guys my w0rst enemy... and i got energy,ta crack ya frame-in-half...DrOwN em in LiQuiD StEeL so he kan be a StaiNLesS-cKrab... pato*=faggit in spanish,im not good wit the spelling of the word but u know what im tryna say cKrab*= the word to dis a crip..he a crip so i kall em ckrab |
Rappers name da punisher , seems we can call you mr.slave..
Givin' it to you in the butt,like White castle its wat you crave.. slob ass nucca, i'll have his color flowing down the concrete... Pull the heat.and crush ya face..see ya set and repeat.... Kill Slobs When I See Slobs, is what ima do to ya crew crips go to heaven cus the sky's blue,slobs go to hell cus red aint true.. You try'n to fuck with me? ,Ha now rv can see jooksta get sliced quick.. Call me the magican they way i make slobs dissapear like an easy magic trick.. Ill come half ass and still merk a bitch ..have you pleadin for your life... performin surgical operation and rip ya head off with my switchblade knife |
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Voted For: _JooKsta_
very hard to vote but lets see this: flow -both Structure - Bonecollector Punchlines - Both Personals - .... Word/Nameplay - Jooksta creativity - Jooksta opeinin - Jooksta Closing - Bonecollector V/Jooksta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: _JooKsta_
Wasnt really feeling the gang nature of this battle but ok... Bone Collector--- Some good concepts for metaphors, punches didnt hit hard though, flow was ok Jooksta--- I liked that last line, punches hit harder, flow was ok Punches::: Jooksta Flow::: Tie Metaphors::: Bone collector Wordplay::: Jooksta Structure::: Bone collector Multis::: Jooksta Final Vote:::: Jooksta::::: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upin this fuckin battle.....for EXPLAINED VOTES only!!! Damn do u bastards know how ta vote properly???
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Voted For: Bonecollector
uuh okay...... opener-jooksta cuzz he had a decent personal...and bone ur's was kind of weak structure-bone his shit was neat and jooksta u need da fix dat it fukks up ya flow punchlines-bone...jooksta wasn't really feelin ur's nun of em stood out creativity-bone personals-jooksta enjoyed-bone v/bone |
Voted For: _JooKsta_
This was close but i gave it to you they both were pretty good, but i think you had a better finish |
Voted For: Bonecollector
i spit barz,plus murder wit da chrome-projecter...merk ya closest of kin now u can really be a BoNe-CoLLeCtor... 4...weak attempt at a play on his name!! u wanna challenge,imma give u da 5th...go head shoot yaself kuz u n0t fuckin wit this... 3...weak, no real punch!! and dont tell me u a ThuG when u SwiTch-iN-SkiRts...i'll pull dat hamma back,klap! n leave u TwiTcHin-in-DiRt... 3...again, no punch, just a lot of shit talkin!! ya writens is worth-less,not even close ya per-fect...how u Ckripin but i always see u High stepin wit pur-ses?... 5...ok fairly decent here!! BoNe aint a threat like da taco-bell-dog...he AiNt PuShiN CraCK,how when dis pato*-fell-off?...lol 5...pretty gud, but shit talkin still!! imma off em,put a stop to his winnin-spree...and since he a CkrAb* dis guys my w0rst enemy... 4...worst enemy, who cares, this aint a real punch!! and i got energy,ta crack ya frame-in-half...DrOwN em in LiQuiD StEeL so he kan be a StaiNLesS-cKrab... [0...WTF!!! no punch, no rhyme!! OVERALL: 24/70 (34%)[/B] Rappers name da punisher , seems we can call you mr.slave.. Givin' it to you in the butt,like White castle its wat you crave.. 5...weak shit, and some homo shit!! slob ass nucca, i'll have his color flowing down the concrete... Pull the heat.and crush ya face..see ya set and repeat.... 5...talkin at the blood, but not good with the wordplay!! Kill Slobs When I See Slobs, is what ima do to ya crew crips go to heaven cus the sky's blue,slobs go to hell cus red aint true.. 4...huh?? this was way weak!! You try'n to fuck with me? ,Ha now rv can see jooksta get sliced quick.. Call me the magican they way i make slobs dissapear like an easy magic trick.. 3...bleh!!! one of the biggest played concepts of all!! Ill come half ass and still merk a bitch ..have you pleadin for your life... performin surgical operation and rip ya head off with my switchblade knife 4...weak again, damn all weak!!! OVERALL: 21/50 (42%%) what the hell, this battle was retarded!!! Jooksta came with no punches really, a lot of shit talkin that wasn't even that good either, bonez, its like ya didnt try, ya had half ass rhymes with played concepts....lucky for you they were actual punches, played ones but still punches!!! V/ - Bonez RTF!!! links in the battle stats!!! WERD!!! |
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