Incense vs MainFrame
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 K.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-14-05 at 11:52 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Incense has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 11:23 AM.

MainFrame has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 11:23 AM.

That MainFrame dude, he's wack, I'll blast that kid.
Shit, I only dissed myself, to give you a chance to win.
In doesn't use common cense so hell will be bound.
But I heard genius struck him, but Incense fell to the ground.
We know those rhyme's aren't your's, don't worry I won't tattle.
Because the only way you receiving credit, is by voting on battle's.
I respect nobody's, and in this battle respect I'm keeping.
I'm tired but I'll let you call the shot's as they pummel your mid-region!

:bored:

your verses is so weak the fuckin' mic spit at you back/
quit now cuz im here to make you split when you wack/
Your punches hit harder than roy jones when he dropped/*
people stoped reading ya verses since ya first line popped/
now this 'cartoon figure' thinks hes hard but hes got/
to understand the incense will leave him 'drawn' on the spot/**
your clips wouldnt empty even if you had a teacher to learn/
if you poured gasoline in throut verses still wouldnt burn/



*roy jones got knocked out so his punches wasnt hard at all.
** a car toon figure is drawn. get it?

This was feedback posted for Incense
 

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Voted For: MainFrame

votin for mainframe


main gets this due to better punches are creative personals


main
ya punches were hard hittin n creative so props on them
ya personals were creative n well worded
didnt see any multies so get some of thme n ya verse
a flow was on the dot
ya strucutre was tigght and easy to read

good verse

incense'
Ya game a bit basic with ya punches
didnt see any personals worth mentionion
ya flow was good so props on that
ya structure was easy to read

ya just didnt come hard enuff with ya punches man and that lost u my vote

elevate on harder punches and personals


v/Mainframe

main gets it i like his punches n personals better then Incense

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Voted For: MainFrame

Weak battle...

MainFrame:

Ok punches, but they need alot of improvement...Wordplay was also weak...personals were ok, and flow was on point

Incense:

Punches need serious elevation...That cartoon charachter line is majorly played...flow was on point, which is a plus, but it really didnt help you that much in this case...

v/ MainFrame

By the way MainFrame...Why did u decline the battle???????

I'm pretty busy, so I wouldn't have time to drop.
Thank's for the vote's.

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One more vote to close ths yo, upping.
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Voted For: MainFrame

your verses is so weak the fuckin' mic spit at you back/
quit now cuz im here to make you split when you wack/
^^set-up was nice..but punch sucked
Your punches hit harder than roy jones when he dropped/*
people stoped reading ya verses since ya first line popped/
^^should have switch up set -up with the punchline
now this 'cartoon figure' thinks hes hard but hes got/
to understand the incense will leave him 'drawn' on the spot/**
^^good
your clips wouldnt empty even if you had a teacher to learn/
if you poured gasoline in throut verses still wouldnt burn/
^^best line in ya verse

Conclusion-Ur flow was average.The 1st couple a lines hurt you the most.U set-up ur punches nicely but the punch itself was whak.U last couple of lines were good.Decent verse.

That MainFrame dude, he's wack, I'll blast that kid.
Shit, I only dissed myself, to give you a chance to win.
^^^didn't rhyme,concept was good but execution was not
In doesn't use common cense so hell will be bound.
But I heard genius struck him, but Incense fell to the ground.
^^Ripped the oppenent's name beautifully
We know those rhyme's aren't your's, don't worry I won't tattle.
Because the only way you receiving credit, is by voting on battle's.
^^weak
I respect nobody's, and in this battle respect I'm keeping.
I'm tired but I'll let you call the shot's as they pummel your mid-region!
^^OK

Conclusion-Incenitive had a better flow.But you owned here in the punchlines.Ur best line was the one where you ripped her name.Don't see that too much here.

Vote-MAinFrame(vote in my battle)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189907

Voted For: MainFrame

Punches-None...Spit more punches to both emcees,thats what i like ta see.

Multis-Didnt see any here,really not a must but try ta get a few in there at times.

Vocab-Frame...there pretty basic..but u won this category do to betta usage of vocab

Personals-Frame...i like how u dissed em thru da whole battle..the otha emcee get props to..but i feel Frame came off better.

Opener-Frame...Lol,nicely worded and funny..u dissed ya'self just ta give him a slight chance of winnin Lol...neva seen that b4

Closer-Tie...both were corny in my opinion...but good try..i just feel yall both wanted ta end it fast

Voted For: MainFrame

Wow one sided battle Incense burned out i guess?!?!

Incense- Started weak and finished weaker that roy jones line was the only decent thing in your verse and cartoon line was just gay talked about guns thats weak to and your vocab was 6th grade any punches you attemted did not connect and your lackin personals

MainFrame- You attempted a Word play personal i like those but it was kinda weak yet your first bar was enough to win this battle but it didn't rhyme but you made up for it with line number6 that was the best line of the battle

overall weak battle but i've seen worse winner MainFrame

return the favor links in sig either one is ok