JoOksta'z iLL WiT Da WoRdPLaY
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190218&

im da hard hitta,got FiSt GaMe like TySoN-Do...
u have No StaTs in BoXin,whats da point of FigHtiN-U...
plus wit ya raps u GaS'seD,so imma IgNiTe u In FLaMeS...
and afta u PaSs AwAY,ya PiCtuRe sitz RIGhT iN A FraMe...
u'll neva StEaL Da ShOw,just got a GloW iN Ya NaMe...
im hot! u get MoTiVaTiOn fr0m my FLoWz In Ya BraiN...(quit memorizen my shit!)
so InTeLLiGeNt, college wanted ta make me a PrOfeSsoR...
but g0t caught wit da DeAnz WiFe...partially UnDrEsSeD-HeR...
i GraNt WiShEs like da GeNiE iN Da LaMp...
MeRK SniTcHes yappin ta polices in my camp(hood)...
im HaRd,but i aint got an ErEcTiOn...
spit wit PeRfECtIoN,been a PrEsiDeNt but skip'd the ELeCtiOnZ...
alwayz gotta keep a WeSsOn fa punks TeStiN Da GreAt...
my bullets been TraVeLiN FA MiLes,so imma let em ReSt In Ya FaCe...
as i run in ya crib,raid da fridge den ReSt In Ya PlaCe...
got ya family TiEd Up,not even da BeSt CaN EsCaPe...

upin fa feedbackkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkk

man that shyt was ILL cuz nice azz wordplay had me like (MAYNE) for a minute there enjoyed readin it hOLLA!

wordplay>8/10

good lookin out homie,preciate the positive feedback

yeah homie.. i liked this peice alot mayne.... really good verse had mad as wordplay damn i like ur shit.. i may have to battle you sum time, the whole verse was on point i liked the whole concept and you stayed on point...
8/10...

good lookin out homie,preciate it,but ay soon as one of my battles close we can get it popin nah mean...holla front

upin dis...yall let it go ta d bottom to fast,holla wit sum feedback