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DQ 05-15-05 12:17 PM

Detrimental vs O.V. Dose
 
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Topic: Addicted

O.V.Dose 05-16-05 04:26 PM

kentucky-fried-checkin

Detrimental 05-17-05 01:11 AM

weeeeee checkity check

O.V.Dose 05-19-05 06:04 PM

Addicted


Jim's love for his girl...was more like an addiction
If there was such thing as a perscription for love it would be written
in bloody sweat, its a sickness and Jim was one of its victims
He'd ask his girl where she was goin she'd say it was none of his business
Symptoms may include: dizziness fatigue and depression
But that didnt weaken his resolve....it only increased his aggression
He needed her permission to kiss the ground this goddess walked upon
At best....their relationship could be described as "off and on"
She got turned off while he kept ramblin on about her physical features
How his life would be incomplete with out her and how much he needs her
Kept phone lines busy for hours he didnt believe in quick calls
If he didnt see her for a week.....he'd go through withdrawls
Got hella jealous when he saw her talkin with other guys
like they were tryin to take his life away ...without her hes undefined
This high he felt when he was close to her was unexplainable
but once she left the buzz he once had now seemed unobtainable
She invaded his heart offering pain for moments of satisfaction
He had a pitiful life.............and this girl was his only distraction
Jim found her with another man....the sight alone left him breathless
Pain was endless, she gave away the love on which he became dependant
She said "Baby listen" and proceeded to try and rationalize it
He despized that his ears wanted to hear the lies she provided
His anger subsided and for a second he just stood there idle
before he said, "Baby i really like you" and went back to the viscious cycle

DQ 05-21-05 05:17 AM

Closed due to opponent not showing


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