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Sakim Aerias vs Triple_N
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Topic: Drowning in Ink |
Yeah I'm here.............
Checking in................ |
Checkin in this
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YO errrrrrrrrr, i need an extension till tomorrow, saturday.
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Extension granted
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The cold air lurks around me as I stand in position With Cold chapped lips and the bruises are not fiction Bad images flows in my brain, like I was equip with the sea I felt like was a mirror, knowing on the outside, I bleed I gasped, As I saw the images un blur and clear…..a fist With hard knuckles pounding on me, it’s quick I cant resist I felt like I was trapped in a box, no way out, I took the pain Every pound, took the wind out of me, tears leak with it man When its over, like pain attach with glue, it’ll never go away But tonight will he his last, and time for me to be……..free As I stood hiding behind the window curtains, as my body ………and my dress soaked with the deadliest color …bleeds As I opened the door I felt the empty presence reeked around me My eye sockets went both left and right, rage crept “where is she?” One step, I felt this awareness in me, telling myself “something not right” Second step, As flicked the lights on, like an open soul, no one still in sight Saw this “flat” presence from a tree, written in ink, my hands went hard It reads “I left” popping veins from my neck, rage, took the letter and discard With my hands looking like a fist, and rage pumps in me, I put my head down For thou I wasn’t aware of the presence no more, knowing that I’m alone now With one movement, I didn’t breathe, with one movement, I didn’t hear My body hit the table black ink leaks on me, with darkness ending my life ……………………………….............. .................No more I see light clear As I walked in front of the door, surprise there’s no sirens waling My blood leaks with the black ink, no more I will be………aching Put my hand on the door knob, nervousness roll in me without thinking My blood leaks with the black ink, no more I will be………aching One turn from the knob, open, finally with a glimpse of light, I’m free My blood leaks with the black ink no forever more………..I breathe As I turned around, see the corpse body, I opened my mouth and said ……………………………….............. .......................Bye honey 1 had rage, the other rage for revenge Now think who saying "BYE HONEY" The husband or the wife? G00d luck guessing it. :thumbup: |
v/ Artistica for showing
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yo that was a nice verse such a shame the other person no-showed......you should've battled me lol.......
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Closed due to opponent no-showing
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