One Night Stand!must read n Reply
 

Wobble that Azz Girl,Move To Da Music
See That Pole right There,I Advise You To Use-it
Have Me Dreamin Bout That Azz Under-da-Sheetz
or In Da Bak Of My Car~ But No Stainz On Da Seats
Tight Azz Jeans-See Ya Curvez Rotatin
Pick ya Up Take Ya Out-Cuz Im Tired Of Waitin
Cruise To Ma Crib,Where No one Will bug-us
Have U Feelin like U In -Heaven-,but No Halos Above-Us
taste So -Delicious-,This Is What Ive Been Cravin
Beat that puzzy up So -hard-,Wont Be Surprise If it Caved-in(lOl)
Babygirl i Know You like It, by The Expression on Ya Face
Continue To Beat It Up Maybe I Should Slow Down Da Pace
Pull it Out-Put It In,Cuz I Know That You Really Like That Feelin
Juice -Cummin- On out,Cuz That Klit Keep Spillin
I got An Idea While Dont Take A -Lunch- Break
Open Ya Mouth,Cuz This (Sausage) should Taste real great
Like Da Way u Do That,Lick N Nibble-A-Bit
(Boppin-n-Weavin) While Ya Grippin-Da-Dik
Sit Back N enjoy While I Return Da Favor
Ho Screamin n Moanin, As If She Was in Labor!
Get Back Up Get Ready--- For Round-Two
This Night Would Have been Shyt If I Wouldnt Have Found-you
Now The Nightz Over,Bye! N Now Shez Out
One Night Stand,Alwayz N With-Out a Doubt
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lmoa...straight for tha fuckin club!...i understand fam, it was simple but to tha point where i got tha messege...structure for text was iffy but its wrote like u would rap it i know...and jus throw dis on a crunk beat and u got a hit!...jus fix tha structure, add a basic hook, and drop anotha verse or two and u straight...7/10 at most fam...real talk

aight shit

structure needs a little fixing, but it flows aight
would probably work better as an audio track

vocabs was fairly average, nuthin too basic, nuthin overly complex..............
nuthin to complex in there really, just straight to the point like doe said
but i like that...................overall 6/10!!!!

RTF!!! on my "RV Goes To War" open mic!!!!

to tell you the truth man i was just thinkin about shyt n typin it n never thought it would come out like it did but im surprised but thank for da FB! N i agree on da structure part,but like i said i was Thinkin N Typin!Average Yeh Pretty Average i never ever Flowed about some shyt like that so thaty was my first! but Holla Atcha Boy! oOoOOOoo Hell YEH n i Got A Battle WHOAH man Now Its On!!!
~Deucez~

(Da One N Only ~Ghost)