CeleriTy vs DaReTuRn
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

verses due 30 minutes after check in.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-15-05 at 03:32 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

CeleriTy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 02:36 PM.

DaReTuRn has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 02:38 PM.

Your 19 rapping againts younger cats its like your froze in time
wait maybe just the fridge but after 6 lines youl be like a mime
to stiff to move just like the trailblazer after they lost rasheed
like detroit im on the top smoking u just like an 8th of weed
really quick without having any regret feeling good afterwards
im done messing with this vegatable go back to being pervs

Voted For: CeleriTy

This battle was aiiight...sorta played.
C-
=you better just try your luck..only way you'll win cuz bitch ya rhymin sucks
If the Wack's "weeded" out in battles.. Da Return bout to be High as fuck
^^^^^punch was coo...aiight opener^^^
=Fuck competing... this cats scared as shit with ruptured breathing
Return looks like a million bucks ...at the start of hunting season
^^^^^Didnt really feel that punch..it was simple^^^
=believe its crunch time... and believe that you dont want to be brave
cause I'll give you a bruised ego to go along with your face
^^^Didnt make sense really..an sorta wack..but it was a punch^^

2/3

Ra"R"-
=Your 19 rapping againts younger cats its like your froze in time
wait maybe just the fridge but after 6 lines youl be like a mime
^^^^WhatThaFuck!?!..really weak opener^^
=to stiff to move just like the trailblazer after they lost rasheed
like detroit im on the top smoking u just like an 8th of weed
^^^^needed re wording badly..sorry punch had no connection^^
=really quick without having any regret feeling good afterwards
im done messing with this vegatable go back to being pervs
^^^^R you talkin pillow talk..cuz that line was weird 4 real^^

0/3

my vote goes tah Celerity cuz DaReturn had sum off punchez
this was a battle 4 tha lunch table..

V-Celerity

This was feedback posted for CeleriTy
 

good shit cuz...liked it, just a little hard for me to follow...

upping............................................ ....

This was feedback posted for DaReTuRn
 

both were weak here....just checkin

*and nice changin the pw cel...

Voted For: CeleriTy

I felt that this battle was mad weak. Celerity-your verse was pretty much the same all the way through. Your punches were kinda stupid. Nothing really to understand, I just think you were rhyming just to be rhyming. The verse was wack to me. Ur personal disses were shit to me, but I think you took this one because your oponent was mad trash. Dareturn-your verse flowed terrible, and your verse looked messy. I didnt really see any punches in your verse either, just a whole bunch of rhyming. I give my vote to celerity becuase I felt his verse was just overall better, and he is a lil more skilled. He made an attempt at a clean diss, and that's what it went down to in this battle. Wack battle. Both need to elevate.


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Voted For: CeleriTy

Your 19 rapping againts younger cats its like your froze in time
wait maybe just the fridge but after 6 lines youl be like a mime
Um, No.....3/10
to stiff to move just like the trailblazer after they lost rasheed
like detroit im on the top smoking u just like an 8th of weed
Nah Man....3/10
really quick without having any regret feeling good afterwards
im done messing with this vegatable go back to being pervs
Best Line....4/10

^^You Lacked Alot, Structure Was Tight Tho, You Had No Real Punches, One Personal, No Wordplay, No Creativity....

you better just try your luck..only way you'll win cuz bitch ya rhymin sucks
If the Wack's "weeded" out in battles.. Da Return bout to be High as fuck
Ta Ha!.....Funni Shit....6/10
Fuck competing... this cats scared as shit with ruptured breathing
Return looks like a million bucks ...at the start of hunting season
Nice Line....6/10
believe its crunch time... and believe that you dont want to be brave
cause I'll give you a bruised ego to go along with your face
Nice Closer....Strong Opener......8/10

Basically You Had Tha Humor, Creativity, Personals...DaReturn's Wasnt Affective...Gave This 2 CELERITY

RTF...Me Against Big_City

This was feedback posted for CeleriTy
 

yall suck. if yall wanna real battle hit up the blazer kuz imma kill it faster then i fucked your bitch. yall fake ass rappers

ohh okay.. uppppp9ng..............................

Voted For: CeleriTy

Yo Diz Iz Too EZ......

It Wuz A Wrap In Da First Bar Fo Real, CeleriTy Killed It, Much More Complex With Evertythin, Just Read An The Rhymes Explain Itself, Nah Mean

V/CeleriTy

Hit Up Mah Battles In Da Signature Cha'll, Thanx

Voted For: CeleriTy

Kinda one sided
breakdown--

D.R.- Wasnt feelin yours, opener kinda got my attention, BUT punches were wack, your only personal didnt hit hard and tha Rasheed line was sorry...so was the Detroit line 3/10

sorry no beef juss facts

Celerity- I was feelin your more because yours was more flow than words...the opener was koo the flow was koo and your punches hit him and your closer was iight 5/10

Overall: Use better personals and punches D.R. and you probably wouldve hung wit C.
For C, next battle be a lil more creative with your punches
Flow- C
Structure- C
Punches- C
Opener- C
Closer- C
Multis- Neither
Personals- D.R. (the only 1)

honest votes should be returned honestly :thumb: