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LexiKon vs MarvJay1009
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No PM'in for votes Verse MUST be posted 6 hours after check Don't get it twizted i wasn't duckin you just didn't have time to battle i haven't been on my computer in a while just been usin the one at school and i only get a half hour at the library so i couldn't drop nothin but now we can do this good luck Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-18-05 at 02:44 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
LexiKon has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 02:46 PM.
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Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks" He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation" You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs" Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-05 08:19 PM.
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da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little. knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".* punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!. ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box". lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty.. ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy".. only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order. da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's" *his old name is mc skitlz...& im sure ya'll know wut skittles r |
Voted For: LexiKon
Marv: good structure, good vocab, good personal, good punchline... but your multi's wasn't dope Lex: good structure, better vocab, good personal, better punchline, good word play & multi's v/ Lexikon Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little. knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".* 6...decent line, gud personal!!! punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!. ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box". 7...better, gud meta in there!! lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty.. ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy".. 5...not really feelin this one, not a hard hittin punch!! only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order. da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's" 7...LMAO!!! nice line, hottest bar of ya verse!! OVERALL: 25/40 Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks" 5...decent meta, but talkin about his record is weak!!! He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation" 7...LMAO!!! the 2nd line was funny!!! You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs" Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs 5...nah!! 2nd line was aight, but the first was played!! Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute 5...weak again, mime references are fuckin played!! OVERALL: 22/40 fairly weak battle, marv i expect better......ya both had some played concepts, i feel lex had more, marv came more consistent with the punches, both had a real nice bar that made me luagh, but overall marv was hittin harder with his wordplay and shit!!! so V/ - Marv RTF!!!! links are in my battle stats, go look!!!! WERD!!!! |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay1009 - Good spit, it flowed well.. it had some good punches, and the wordplay was good. Best Line - da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little. knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".* Worst Line - punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!. ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box". LexiKon - Good flow, punches are good and you had some iight wordplay. Best Line - Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute Worst Line - You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs" Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs OVERALL - Marv won this battle, his wordplay was better and his punches were better. He had a good flow, Lex you had a good flow to, your punches just wernt as strong. Vote - Marv Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: LexiKon
LexiKon Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks" ^lego-line might be bit played but overall coo opener He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation" ^ROFl at that last line, had me cracking You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs" Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs ^nice wordplay formed into a hard punch Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute ^nice closer Good battle verse right here, got that wordplay on lock and you had some damn hardhitting punches, no real personals though. I laughed my ass off at that second bar with them midgets, hahaha...good one there man! Flow's good, got some multis in there, not too much basic rhyming. Found great balance in your vocabulary, not too basic but not too complex either. Structure is cool and overall I was really feeling this verse man! MaRVJay1009 da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little. knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".* ^dope last line, nice personal, not feeling first line punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!. ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box". ^good wordplay but no real punch though lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty.. ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy".. ^hehe funny bar only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order. da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a "roll of quarter's" ^nice wordplay again, good closer Nice verse here too, had dope personal in first line and good punches for the rest. I was feeling your flow here, also had some multis in there which improved that. My favo bar is the third one or the closer, they both nice filled with wordplay but the punch doesn't always come out too good like in the second bar. The vocab was cool, same level as LexiKon, structure looks nice as well. Some nice rhyming words here too. My vote goes to LexiKon because he got me laughing with some of his bars, bit more creativity and stayed more consistent. No hate whatsoever Marv, you got nice verse as well but I have seen way better from you. Kinda got feeling you let this one off easy ya know... |
Voted For: LexiKon
Punches-Lex...i feel his was more funnier ta me,and hard hitten also...Marv u got sum nice punches also Multis-Marv...better usage of wordplay goes to u,Lex try added sum wordplay in ya verses Personals-Marv...Battle verses need these,and Marv's personals towards Lex were funny..LmaO@Mc Skittlez Vocab-Lex...nothin really eye popin but i give u this do to the use of a couple words the average person would look up in the dictionary cuz they dont know what dey mean Opener-Lex...Nice punch,and personal in opener.nicely worded also Closer-Marv...Nice personal,and punch here.Worded Nicely and also Funny LoL Structure-Tie..both emcee verses were easy ta read V/Lex Gets vote Due to hard punches |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
V/MaRVJay1009.....this was a good battle both dropped good verse but marv had some good punchs an was consistent wit the creative an he had good personals an structure.....Lex it seems u came to lightly i seen better from you ur punchs weren't that different some played..no personals from u really..........NO hate........ RETURN THE FAVOR...... Opener=m Closer=m Structure=m Punchs=m Vocab=m Multi's=Tie (not many) Personals=m Wordplay=Tie Overall=MaRVJay1009 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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