Post the First flow you wrote
 

I started rapping after I heard Nig L and heres my first written

Lyrically theirs not many who could test my floetry cuase ~
When I be rappin people be snappin like their in poetry clubs ~
I don't take much seriously, so when I remarks take it how you wanna ~
But you analyze, I'll leave your decomposing anatomy bakin' in a sauna ~
I'm well recognized on the mic, you don't have a chance don't rap ~
My bars are beyong basic,when their written it proves I use advanced vocab ~
Only a few niggas understood the complexcity in my scripts when i was unheard ~
that made mc's suffocate the color purple, like a smurf with a sunburn ~
And those wack liers ~ who attempted to make my plans diminish and back fire ~
will cause my punchlines to hit thiers lungs, and leave them aired out like flat tires~

hmmmmmmmm i dont see many havin that much wordplay in their first written but thats good for u, lol...... mines was prolly like

I get all the hoes..... just so u know
i told a girl she sucked... she was like "i also blow"
Oh no, these bitches are gettin real stupid
i tell hoes i dont love em, like snoop did
Oooh shit, yall are foolish, but i rule them charts
fuck ya girl in the mornin, and than shoot some darts

my old OM "Blah Blah"...that was my first lol...

Thats eriously my first, I tried to jack Big L's entire style no lie

^mine was prolly alot like fux's, cept it wuz just a bit better, lol^

lol, my 1st shit wuz frum ova 3 years ago wen i wuz 13, check it...

yo me n my homie went 2 tha sto
n i wuz checkin out all of tha hoes
then i turned 2 my right, and wut did i c?
a stupid muthaphukka who wuz lookin at me
so me n my homie, we kicked hiz ass
then we went out back n started sellin grass
tha stupid muthaphukka wuz very sad
he sed "sellin weed iz really bad"
i sed "yeah i do sappose"
then i swung my fist n i broke hiz nose
then i swung my bat wif all of my might
hit him in tha leg, yeah i wanted 2 fight
he just layed there wif hiz broken leg
he sed "u stupid muthaphukkin fag"
so i swung my bat again n i hit him in tha face
then he reached in hiz pocket, and pulld out sum mace
so i turned around n i ran away
n sed "u aint gittin me wif that pepper spray"
then i got in tha car n drove ova hiz legs
hiz frends came 2 help him, but they were all fags
so me n my homie both shot em up good
then me n my homie drove back 2 tha hood

lmao, shits frum early 2002, i went 2 skool tha day after i wrote it n wuz rappin it 2 everybody n they wuz all like "holy shit u good at rappin" LMAO, werd

you started off to at an early age

Me in november 2003

the first piece of dopeness i ever put up................



WERD!!!! :thumbup:

^^^^ dopeness....... but mines the best..... shit, see that wordplay on suck and blow...... ooo wee, cant defeat that man

Undastand my emotion is so focused neva has one been so hot and yet the coldes//t
cop the metaphores that i send to u and any of them bitch affilates that u run with//
probly secretly dien ya hair and exchange ya jeans and shorts for skirts//
talk to ya pastor and convert to muslim and hopefully you wont get murked//
cop the techniques kid im pre-warnin you im good//
elax lips ah have u catchin em in the back like ricky off boyz in the hood//
ya cd's ah neva reach up out the plastic//
done battlein ni99az claimen they hard but they ass hole stretched out like elastic//
get ya crew to beg and plead-wont matter you bound 2 end up numb like chris reeves/


My 1st Battle..........Wow this was garbage

My first battle on RV was against you ^^^^^^^^ lol

i would put my first shit down, but idk how long ago that was and i know damn well i can't find it. it would be from when i was like 14 or somethin

Rofl. Lemme go search for this shit. I'll have it in a second.

First Text Battle-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=84781

First Open Mic-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=81167

Lmao. I was fucking sick.