Blackanese aka Jazzy Jeff Diss (drop links)
 

this was done for a league on another site...just some basic shit...

"vs Blackanese aka Jazzy Jeff"
HI FI: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2426764&q=Hi
LO FI: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2426764&q=Lo
MP3: http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down....cfm?ID=2426764
Music Page: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/blaccbattlesmusic.htm

His Pic:


Lyrics
Verse 1
Allow me to reintroduce myself, my name is B-L-A to the Dub C/
I neva eva seen dreds on a chinese/
im ripping this man twice like a siamese/
hes half of me, so im choppin off "Blacks Knees"/(Blackanese)
weak rhymes, guarantee you wont go far/
lookin like a fag version of Nimrod/
weak delivery soft when he spits bars/
running with viagra and he still cant go hard/
first drop been wack every since/
only jazzy jeff I know is the one with Fresh Prince/
name biter, thats played like a street fighter/
spits decent lines yea, cuz he got a ghostwriter/
high school geek you need to hit the books son/
His pic screams "I Love Pokemon"/
heres some advice, drop from the league/
cuz jazz been played since BB King.

Verse 2
Yo im back again/
he got a nose like stimpy and a face like ren/
black gets a lot of replies on RM/(rapmusic)
then again most of the posts are from him/
the man cant see me cause his lights are dim/
someone explain why hes trynna look like nim(rod)/
it’s the bitch in you, your way to feminine/
confused about your race like mufuckin eminem/
to tell you the truth, nobody knows/
your just a fag inside, in yo pic it shows/
goin to star wars conventions cause he think its cool/
thats the influence of a mostly white school/
chill man, imma cut you some slack/
lying to these people, we all know you aint black/
this is to easy just a quick breeze/
only ahead when "blacks" on his "knees"(blackanese)

Responded to...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190612
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190815
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190717
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190472

Returning feedback.... Listening while typing....

Intro is some weird shit, lol @ you rippin on his shit in the beginning, iight lets give a listen....

ROFL @ opening, yea this shit is better than I expected, you got a solid delivery, lyrics are fairly decent, a couple bars were real solid, lol @ opening couple bars in second verse... I think lyrical content got better in the second verse for a little while... lol I really liked the adlibs throughout it, wordplay for your ass... lol yea this was a decent listen, keep droppin em, appreciate the feedback.1

Rofl, that beggining was funny as shit, had me cracking up! I like you voice, it's dope. The flow in this was pertty solid, I liked it a lot, the lyrics were pretty good, some things stood out more then others. Nice job man, I really liked this, still laughing! (Return the feed when you can to my thread "I'm Emcee Remix")

i'll get at it in a few...up...

da ....intro is some FUNNY ASS SHIT bre..damn had me laughin hard..nice idea wid the voice ova

beat luv this shit....u drop in hard, wid the jigga line tho, not feelin that...u start rippin this guy, lyrically id say its average ish in da first verse but the fact there actual personals make em hard hittin lol...viagra conept is a lil played...nice Fresh Prince line...2nd vesre is much ebtter lyrically and more inventive..id say change up ur flow...keep doin ur thang, shit was dopeness...got a feelin u probs ripped this guy in the battle..:thumbup: and lmao @ "wordplay 4 yo ass"lol