tim dim vs smokey817
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-16-05 at 02:37 AM

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smokey817 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 02:07 AM.

hey
 

i set it up u spit frist nigga is it all good homie

tim dim has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 02:11 AM.

Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down
Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son
Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun

pffft good luck

nigga i come thru guns a glorded aimin at tim dim beatin is like mj hittin da the rim ain't go happen u ain't gonna win shit from dis battle son nigga fuck it i'll give u my bitch that will settle the score SHIT u might win dis battle but u'll never beat me in da streets cuz i'm packin my heat and i'm gonna be clappin don't be mad at me when it happens ur just another victim in this game boy and i don't lie i'm as true as the come u faker then snoop dogg rappin with timberlake tryin to be a gangsta nigga u ain't nothin but a wanksta niggas will be dissin u and u won't do shit bout it nigga u ain't hard unless i'm on da mic rappin nigga i'm come thru with ak's shoot up ur hole crew but u cuz i wanna put some hands on u is that cool dog holla at cha boy cuz u know i'm 4 that 187 sendin nigga to heaven

damn
 

i like dis eating weeds the only time you spit dope son thats tight homie

damn
 

40 people viewed already and no votes ain't that some shit

fuck
 

damn somebody fuckin vote u fuckin idoits damn this is bullshit take to long

^ lol yeah it takes ages to get votes I've had battles open for a couple of months but the site should be active soon cause its nearly summer in us

uppin
 

uppin this for some fuckin votes bitch ass motherfuckers ain't hard fuckin dumdasses

Voted For: smokey817

nice rap....better than the other....you get the win

Voted For: tim dim

BOTH OF YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT. THIS BATTLE GOES TO TIM BECAUSE OF HIS STRUCTURE. AND I FELT HIS OVERALL VERSE WAS BETTER. HIS ATTEMPTS AT PUNCHES AND DISSES WERE NOTICEABLE AND BETTER. SMOKEY, FIX UP YOUR STRUCTURE AND SHIT BEFORE YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT GETTING INTO ANOTHER BATTLE. I SUGGEST YOU GO VOTE ON BATTLES TO SEE HOW STRUCTURE SHOULD LOOK. YOU DIDNT EVEN HAVE ANY DOPE LINES IN THERE, AND IT WAS HARD TO READ. TIM GETS MY VOTE EASILY. EVEN THO BOTH VERSES WAS MAD WACK.
HE WINS THIS BECAUSE OF HIS STRUCTURE AND ATTEMPT AT PUNCHES AND DISSES. AND I CAN SEE HE HAS MORE POTENTIAL TO BE DOPE IN THA LONG RUN THAN SMOKEY.
~1~

Get That Vote Taken Off.....not Mine, Tha Other Fag...josh Or Some Shit...unexplained........

Pc

uping this so people vote on it .....ok.....ooo...