Adrenaline vs CA$per
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-16-05 at 03:50 PM

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CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 03:22 PM.

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 03:28 PM.

How r u gonna battle me,with that verse bein so obserd……
Cause hows he gonna punch me, when,hesa star warz nerd…..
Dogg u make or break no one-unlike your user title claimz……
Dogg if your rapz were hair,u couldn’t be saved by rogain……
Your shits so plain I mean,look at your battle with ax youll see……
Tha only way u could even get one vote,is by mentionin me…….
talk about sumone get burned like matches,well than u flared……
its cause adrenilen STINKZ like sulfur,hes highly compared……
u even rymed dogg with dawg,sorry that’s not really a ryme….
but that would explain thou,why your record is six and nine…..
how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather…..
if your so pumped with adrenilin,im like ritalin makin u mellow…
u couldn’t be KODAC matrial,if ya had tha spokesman for jello.

ayo...here I go like dis...

Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business
"somebody stop me" cuz im leave dis kid's whole face "masked"
ya im "glowin in the dark" n' my lightsaber will have u harrased
leave you "clowned" so bow down b4 u get ya head "circused"
sever ya lungs n' ya "click" so even ya "phonelines" get nervous
ya im coppin da "sickest" flow that's why im "rushin" the system
I "make u or brake you" so stop "fallin off" b4 u lose ya "rhythm"
tried to battle me on "da 13th" so u can clear ur "suspicions"
but ur a "ghost" u fear me cuz my shots to emcees they rid em
...

just a quickey...dont know how much time left so whatever...

judge...

ok...I think u won dis...but whatever...text is herbish...im tryin to get a mic man...


uppin...

uppin this for votes yall.........................................

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

Easy.....................checking Polls.............lol

Voted For: CA$per

Adrenaline:

Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business
^^^^bad openin, good line
"somebody stop me" cuz im leave dis kid's whole face "masked"
ya im "glowin in the dark" n' my lightsaber will have u harrased
^^^^nah
leave you "clowned" so bow down b4 u get ya head "circused"
sever ya lungs n' ya "click" so even ya "phonelines" get nervous
^^^lol, good line
ya im coppin da "sickest" flow that's why im "rushin" the system
I "make u or brake you" so stop "fallin off" b4 u lose ya "rhythm"
^^^wack
tried to battle me on "da 13th" so u can clear ur "suspicions"
but ur a "ghost" u fear me cuz my shots to emcees they rid em
^^^^wack

ur problem was tryin too much to have a wordplay that you didn't had and again u talkin to much of a ghost that's old....

Ca$per:

How r u gonna battle me,with that verse bein so obserd……
Cause hows he gonna punch me, when,hesa star warz nerd…..
^^^^good personal
Dogg u make or break no one-unlike your user title claimz……
Dogg if your rapz were hair,u couldn’t be saved by rogain……
^^^^good
Your shits so plain I mean,look at your battle with ax youll see……
Tha only way u could even get one vote,is by mentionin me…….
^^^^Good punchline
talk about sumone get burned like matches,well than u flared……
its cause adrenilen STINKZ like sulfur,hes highly compared……
^^^^mmmmm....
u even rymed dogg with dawg,sorry that’s not really a ryme….
but that would explain thou,why your record is six and nine…..
^^^^great punchline
how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather…..
^^^^good line
if your so pumped with adrenilin,im like ritalin makin u mellow…
u couldn’t be KODAC matrial,if ya had tha spokesman for jello.
^^^^oooohhhhh..... good closing

U got the punchlines.... a good battle

V/ Ca$per

uppin this .................................................. ..........to tha top....

bump to tha mah fukkin top ................................................

im no longer uppin this due to knowing I lost... .

Voted For: CA$per

Punches-Ca$...wasnt really hard hitten,but its the effort that counts...elevate cuz u have potensial

Vocab-Ca$...nice use of words,mainly basic

Multis-None...Really didnt pinpoint any multi usage in etha emcees verse...so nobody gets this category

Personals-Both...i liked how u both were comin directly at each utha...thats how a battle should be..

Opener-Ca$...Lol what got u the win in this category was that Star Wars Line...Lmaoo dude got a Light Saber in his sig ROTFLMAO..

Closer-Both...nothin really hard hitten,so u tie in this category..

Ca$= 6/10
Adrenaline=5/10

Voted For: CA$per

WHOAH nice Battle!Adrenaline Likes Ya Linez Man Like Da Wordplay N Punches!Scheme Was Good!But I have To Give It To Casper! Reasons
1)Just Came Sik Wid It
2)Punches Came Harder
3)Word Scheme Was alot better
(But its A honest Vote)
VOTE>>Casper

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline: You had a good verse, witty punches that connected. Consistant punches all the way through ya verse. Nice metaphors and good personal dissing Ca$per directly.
Fav bar.
Im a "livin legend" so this kid should "replace my sig wit his"
u a "friendly ghost",damn just disappear from da rap business

Overall, 55%.

Ca$per: You had a decent verse, but alot of your bars were basic. Some of your punches weren't that great. Not enough personals in my opinion.
Fav bar.
how tha fukk u a legend in tha makin,u still aint any better…..
only way u elevate is in a hot air balloon in windy weather

Overall, 35%.
v/Adrenaline, just dropped harder. No hate, Adrenaline please rtf in my sig. Much appreciated.