Abnormal™ vs SleepedOn2
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No crew/dr/hate/unexplained votes
No recyclin'
No bitin'
No feedin'

jea, wats da business...

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 05-16-05 at 05:41 PM

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Abnormal™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 05:12 PM.

SleepedOn2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 05:12 PM.

im up at bat against a dude thats abnormal//
everything bout u is natural except when u rap its formal//
so this cat must wanna dance but he aint ready to take a girl out//
im looking for some personals he has no profile nothing to talk about//
bang bang i murdered this faggot down n he gettin bac up//
he was caught behind not bein smart his rhymes slip cuz he slacked up//
he only shows text battle records why cuz them other are a shame//
hes happy im goin 1st so he can get my bars but thats not gone save u from still bein lame//
i think u shud hear this, so listen to my facts that im speakin to u kid//
never freestyle lyrically n thats literally u dont want to make the mistake Vanilla Ice did//
this man is from the so amazing place of the high towers//
hmm...few words my lines elevated so they catch high in da cloud dudes like him n devour//

This was feedback posted for SleepedOn2
 

your jawnt was pretty nice...didnt like the other one too well. i'd give you the vote if i could.

shut up n keep it movin then............u dumb if u think he beat me lol

lets get votes

Voted For: Abnormal™

nigga u sicknin...its true...but ya birth defect dont make ya lines mean//
open ya mouth...i'll have u CHEWIN MORE L'S than a STARVED FIEND//
6/10......Dat Shit Was Aight
u grew up a unknown herb...slim fagget kid with no SENSE or nerves//
only pussy he had was INFLATABLE.... she couldnt feel da dick in her!//
7/10......Dat Was A Good Personal Aha
stop braggin bout wins...last W u had... was writtin on a language test//
harm u? yes!....last nite a NIKE TOOK U OUT... y u DATIN CHECKS??//
6/10....Ya Shit Coulda Been More Powerful
to hurt this asses feelings... his moms threw out his exlax & propane//
sleeped is so lame...he take SHOTS AT DA ROC like a DRUNK DAME!// *
7.5/10.......Tight Line.......Both Were On Point
nigga fuck your applaudes...in this battle... i'm doin all da clapping//
i turned da make-up of your skin explosive... like tha surface of Saturn//
8/10........Best Line You Had, Nice Punch
gimme a reason y i shouldnt merk this bitch... u major in usin ya lips//
on dick...dats y he showed up HALF WHITE like a black n caucasion chic!//
7/10.........Nice Personal In Both Lines


im up at bat against a dude thats abnormal//
everything bout u is natural except when u rap its formal//
so this cat must wanna dance but he aint ready to take a girl out//
im looking for some personals he has no profile nothing to talk about//
bang bang i murdered this faggot down n he gettin bac up//
he was caught behind not bein smart his rhymes slip cuz he slacked up//
he only shows text battle records why cuz them other are a shame//
hes happy im goin 1st so he can get my bars but thats not gone save u from still bein lame//
i think u shud hear this, so listen to my facts that im speakin to u kid//
never freestyle lyrically n thats literally u dont want to make the mistake Vanilla Ice did//
this man is from the so amazing place of the high towers//
hmm...few words my lines elevated so they catch high in da cloud dudes like him n devour//

^^All You Really Had Was A Few Punches, No Real Flow, Wordplay Eh...I Guess You Had Some But It Didnt Move Me

OPENER: Ab
MIDDLE: Ab
CLOSER: Ab

Its Dat Simple, Both Need Elevation Tho....Work On Wordin Ya Lines Betta & Creativity....Also Structure, Abnormal Ya Flow Was Good....Sleeped Ya Flow Was Nah Lol One Sided

RTF...I Got Hella Battles Open