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View My Vission
(HOOK)2x
I set my own destiney i define my own style I face the facts why yall still livein in denile Why cant all of you just view my vission Keep doin it bitch its just more fuel for my ambition! (HOOK)2x Imagine a picture painted perfect... Imagine a scripture tainted from murder... Guns blastin led be intrudin ya head... Imagine beein investagated by the feds... Imagine beein draged away in cuffs... Drugs and criminals and lack of funds... Are those the things that mean shit?... What ever happened to leadership... That was thrown away when pac died... Must i seem like a tough guy?... To get some respect from herbs?... Why rap about death that accured?... If thats the shit that we wanna be stoppin... Then on the next track ya got guns cockin and popin... Will...We all on some level of beein a hypocrit... But why hate on me cause im gifted and... Im tryin to help the people that are supposibly insignificant... I flow for the street and the underdog... Parents and teachers aint involved... No ones watchin ya back so ya grab a gat... Violence and constant confertations my habbitat... No escape i have wittnesed all i can take... Im tired off seein lil girls beein victims of rape... We residin in such a fucked up society... And they wonder why i dont practice sobriety... Im tired of all the shit thats viewed on the news... Times up rise up change ya views!... (HOOK)2x I set my own destiney i define my own style I face the facts why yall still livein in denile Why cant all of you just view my vission Keep doin it bitch its just more fuel for my ambition! (HOOK)2x |
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You have a kind of Eminem vibe, but thats good right? Anyway, i feel you swithed the topic a little bit, so you got me confused a few times. Good emotion and the imagery was on-point.
Overall, 75%. |
thanks for the feed back and uppin................
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uppin.............................................
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EY im returnen the favor dawg....That shit was crazy . Had me thinking . I love shyt that makes me think. 9/10 . keep it coming
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thanks for the feedback homie.....................
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Aeyo I Agree Wit Omnivision.......Ya Shit Did Confuse Me At Parts........But Overall Nice Drop
6/10 |
uppin ladies......................................
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yo havent seen ur shit up here that much anymore...but yet again i never look much anymore...yo that was some deep shit...got some emotion in there and it went together good...i liked the hook the most..keep that shit up....8.5/10 keep it up
and yo....u should get a decent mic and start doin audios...if u do i can produce tracks for u if u want me too |
thi swas ok, kind of hard to follow at sometimes, but u had some decent bars in there and some ight flow. overall i give it a 7/10...1...
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thans for the feed yall
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Your flow is kinda choppy. But i get the concept, which is played out. Um, upp your vocab, You need to stretch your liens, just a little.
It's an ok verse, just keep writing. |
uppin.............................................
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uppin dawg......oh and by the way for all ya'll thats interested..i went on a field trip today and got ta watch a couple cattle get brutally butchered and thraots slit while their blood is pourin out in gallons!!! it was fuckin dope as FUCK!!!!!...
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