~Babylon~ vs marvjay1009
 

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~Babylon~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 02:18 AM.

u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 11:27 AM.

look.....

dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**

*babylon is a planet....u'll get it

**and governer mc grevy was new jersey's governer..but then came out da closet and told everybody he was gay

babylons not a planet........................................lol

yes it is u dick...............................n u wonder why u still in da 9th grade & u 19

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
^^ LoL good punch cuz i get it 7/10
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
^^ RoFl yo dat shit was funni 9/10
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
^^ good punch 7/10dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
^^ LoL good punch yo 7/10did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
^^ i kno bout dat homo ass nigga he was on tv b4 good punch tho 7/10

u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
^^ aight punch but i dont curr about wat u iz 7/10

u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
^^ good punch on da real 8/10

"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
^^ didnt rhyme not a good punch 4/10

at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
^^ aight punch culd of been worded betta 6/10

marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
^^ dont get it realli so nah 3/10

aight marv took dis he verse was betta n he came harder threw da whole thing

vote-marvjay1009

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Voted For: ~Babylon~

~Babylon~ You had a good spit, punches were landin' at it flowed well.

Best Line - at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night

Worst Line - u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy


MaRVJay1009 - iight spit, kinda whack to what you usally got. flow was iight. Punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".

Worst Line - dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*

OVERALL - Good battle, both came hard. I think bab won this, I liked his punches and flow better. Marv you should have tried harder, there wasnt many good punches.

Vote - ~Babylon~

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This was a pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to Marv..

Marv
dis fag stay frontin i cant stand it,admit u aint damm sick.
"babylon"'s my son but he was mistake me & his moms aint "PLaN-it".*
LOL!, nice opener
ya punches dont land bitch!,u gon be da next youngin i might merk.
i ask em 4 a 'pink slip' he said nah i only wear dos unda my white skirt.
Decent
yes i flow sicka than u!..but u aint neva load clipps in da tool.
he cant get a girl "wet" so he pulls out his dick then "throw a bitch in da pool".
Ha.. nice
dis kid a fool...thinkin goin at marv dat he really a win.
babylon dont 'drive car's' he just "the parker" like "nicky & kim".
lol, the parkers..decent
did i try hard? hell no merkin dis dumb ass fukk was easy.
babylon u prove dat there's more "fags in jersey" then "governer mc grevy"**
Nice punchlines, decent closer

Bablyon
u'r a member, I'm a CS legend, never put yourself a head of me
your temperary "an underdog on top" I'm a syndicated legacy
Decent opener , alittle self glorious
u tried to challenge the whole site, tried to fuck the community
but thats ya "birth" right, cuz ya mom showed the same inginuity
Eh.. decent
"amerikaz nightmare", sorry but thats just obsean couzin
someone being scared of marv? Ha! I wouldnt dream of it
I dont think that rhymes?
at least queens aint got global warming, cuz the climate aint right
cuz your shit use 2 be hot, now its more of a mid summers night
...you called him dope? but your tryin to diss him..guess it was decent
marv thought he'd run through me, but his conditionings missing
cause its turning out to be more like a fast type of skipping
nice closer

Overall vote- Goes to marv, to me he came harder , nicer punhclines..some okay personals..babylon shyt was weak, and some of his punchlines werent hitten , ... overall keep it up and elevate both .

Voted For: ~Babylon~

babylon got this hands down, overall the more consistant verse, hard hittin personals an pounches where as marv had some useless rhymes which would of been aight for open mic, but it dont cut it in battles....vote babylon.

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