JaEx vs The Militant
 

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12 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-20-05 at 05:50 PM

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JaEx has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 05:50 PM.

The Militant has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 05:56 PM.

Soon a vet gon' lose to someone doing his first real battle on RV
Unlike L dot Hughes I could be doing my worst but ya cant guard me
I'm going to do you like what the Wizards did to the Bulls
You couldn't have seen this verse like you pulled the wool
Over your eyes if you think you gon win but you won't cause I'm a genius
Plain and simple you suck like a whore you needin a penis
Or a donor once I rip out your heart like a three from Arenas
Of rappers on this site I'm an A you aint even leading the E-List
I'll cap ya with what I write you're receding your lyrics is egregious
I work with pure rage 3 years less than your age but this joints still a thrilla
San Deigo murder rate in the country rank 199 What about your state "Killa" mine's iller
Baltimore DC seven and eight here guns find my lines very similar we'll hit ya up like a tiller

(tiller = the blade of grass that shoots up from the ground. key word is shoot up if you still too dumb to get it. and egregious means so bad that you can't believe it's real)

Im gonna skip past the meta to state ya wack...
Ya open mic did it for me it made that fact...
Clear to the every one that ya ass is puppet...
And that ya love to have mans hands up it...
I aint playin i saw that ya from a mary land...
The only time ya stright is if marys a man...
"WTFs wrong with you" the question ya should be askin...
Ya should put ya rhymes in the same place i put my crap in...
Wanna know why his names JaEx cause hes ja rules EX...
Do ya lick ya keyboard cause ya suck at text...
From day one ya never had a chance and its a known fact...
Ya could be jill suckin dick on a hill ya still couldnt blow jack...

explanations:
"Ya open mic did it for me it made that fact..."
he did an open mic and it barley rhymed no flow check for ya self

"I aint playin i saw that ya from a mary land..."
mary land=maryland where hes from...get it

""WTFs wrong with you" the question ya should be askin..."
his open mic was called "WTFs wrong with us"

"Wanna know why his names JaEx cause hes ja rules EX..."
his names JaEx like Ja Rule...get it

"Ya could be jill suckin dick on a hill ya still couldnt blow jack..."
jack and jill on a hill its simple

Any way dont get then dont vote!
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This was feedback posted for The Militant
 

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Voted For: The Militant

This was a weak battle ima have to give this one to The Militant , he just came alittle harder

JaEX
Your verse was plain simple wack , your concepts were petty , and you had no punchlines.. you were talking about how this was your first battle , and how you were gonna win.. your structure was off , and was all over.. personals were ugh , cus there really wasnt any ..overall elevate alot , and read some tutorial on how to make punchlines , and personals..

The Militant
Your verse wasnt any better then jaex , you hust came alittle harder..your concepts were simply too.. learn to make harder punchlines..you had some okay personals...you won this battle in my point of view , just for using some punchlines , and some okay personals..keep it up

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Voted For: The Militant

I like it easly the militant, I say it was 5 to 8 I really liked the line, Do Ya like Ya keyboard cause ya suck at text, made me laugh peace

Voted For: JaEx

JaEx - this battle was not good but you were better than The Militant..your flow was good and your freestyle was really good but your structure was iiight.. keep working hard 7/10

The Militant - Next time use more words in each bar... and use bigger words which makes your freestyle better...your flow was not that good and your structure was iiight. keep workin hard. 5/10

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