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I'm Sorry....WHO??" vs 9th Degree
Official Battle: ~Best Text Battle: April Award~
9th Degree vs. I'm Sorry....WHO??" Battle type: Text :thumbup: KO = 5 votes. Note: 3 votes will be provided by me, Flow, and Deadly (the award mods) if the battle's open anytime past the 15th of May. ~Rules~ 14 MAXIMUM No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit 1 full day to check in, 2 full days to drop your verses. All have accepted, therefore no excuses, so check in and bash the hell each other! Good Luck. ~Lady Fiya Minimum posts to vote: 1000 Check in by: 05-18-05 at 07:17 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
I'm Sorry....WHO??" has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 08:56 PM.
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9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 12:10 AM.
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Create a new law son, this ain’t 1st or 2nd, I commit murder in the 9th Degree…
RV’s Gangsta?? The only time you touch a G is when ya type the key… Ya see flashing images of ya death, 9th looked at me and he blinked… Vigilante?? Only time ya above the law is in chopper rides over the precinct… Always with logical answers ‘n’ shit, seriously 9th must be a mass-debater…(masturbator) So I guess the only thing for you to decide is…jerk off right now or later… I’ll help ya diss…”Solo is gay!!” there you go 9th, you can have a freebie… Got ya samurai sig so ya understand why ya lines make me wanna ‘hara-kiri’…* Pot of golden lyrics got ya winnin…I get it, after all leprechauns are a lucky breed… Now ya pots all empty, maybe that’s why ya no-showed in ya own fuckin league… 9th likes to be in charge of rhymes, copies ‘n’ pastes just so he can control a spit… Claims to be “A Master of the Verbal Arts” but really he just talks a load of shit… Challenged SPuL and me to a 2-on-1 I gotta admit it was a bold move… But ya ain’t worth shit, it only takes one of us to write a check and own you…(cheque) * Samurai Code: “Hara-Kiri” means to commit suicide, to take ones life. Don't get anything else then do not vote!!! :thumbup: |
You're cocky as hell, but before that your skill we hardly knew
Someone said "Solo's dope!" I just replied "I'm Sorry...Who??" I've persevered, earned a rep, but your hopes were so bleak You changed your name so you could hop my nuts if I hit a cold streak "So weak" is an understatement, your spittin' is cursed You're the center of attention…when we see where you positioned your verse Yeah, "solo" lines are played, but really you don't bring forces Only d/r's, oh, sorry, I mean all the King's horses But if I accused you of that, you'd get bent out of shape like limbos You couldn't bring the pane if you were installin' my windows Claim to be royalty, but I remain skeptical And have your rhymes throne…in the trash receptacle |
Voted For: 9th Degree
lmfao yo dis nigga killed solo da whole verse 9th degree- aight yo u had sum hott as punches on da real dey all hit harder den solos u had sum hott ass personals dem and da punches took dis battle ya structure was a lil off how u played off hiz verse about da position part was hott 2 u had sum good wordplay bout hiz country shit was hott fix ya strucutre tho yo u did have sum hot multies to it started off good threw da verse it was good and it ended good to so u get da win cuz of dat solo-yo u talk alot i thaught u was gon win but u didnt all ya lines was stretched u did have sum punches tho i aint gon hold u but dey wasnt as good as 9th degree punches u did have sum nameplay on hiz name personals was kind of iffy ya structure shit realli needs to b fixed man ya verse started off kind of aight it was a lil dull threw it and it ended ok not a good drop from u fix ya strucutre have sum more creative punches and cum harder next time u gon win vote- 9th degree |
^^^ i aint even gonna dignify that vote with a response!!!!
all i'm sayin is UPPIN THIS BITCH!!!!!!! |
Voted For: I'm Sorry....WHO??"
YEAH THIS WAS EASY TO DECIDE ICE D-PUNCHES ON POINT VOCAB WAS GOOD EASY TO FOLLOW NICE FLOW AND STRUCTURE PLUS CAME VERY DIRECT AND JUST GOT THA JOB DONE NICELY 9TH-GOOD VERSE TOO BUT IT DIDNT REALLY FLOW ALL THAT WELL PLUS IT WAS BAD IN STRUCTURE IT WAS A GOOD VERSE BUT SINCE SOLO HAD U IN TWO CATAGORIES IMMA HAVE TO GIVE IT HIM DOPE VERSES FROM BOTH JUST SOLO GOT IT BY A CUNT HAIR RTF ON ONE OF MY BATTLES |
Voted For: 9th Degree
tight ass battle here sons solo >Create a new law son, this ain’t 1st or 2nd, I commit murder in the 9th Degree… RV’s Gangsta?? The only time you touch a G is when ya type the key… hmm, not feeling this one, weak 3/10 >Ya see flashing images of ya death, 9th looked at me and he blinked… Vigilante?? Only time ya above the law is in chopper rides over the precinct… little self glor on the first, and second was whack, lol 2/10 >Always with logical answers ‘n’ shit, seriously 9th must be a mass-debater…(masturbator) So I guess the only thing for you to decide is…jerk off right now or later… funny...5/10 >I’ll help ya diss…”Solo is gay!!” there you go 9th, you can have a freebie… Got ya samurai sig so ya understand why ya lines make me wanna ‘hara-kiri’…* not bad, 6/10 >Pot of golden lyrics got ya winnin…I get it, after all leprechauns are a lucky breed… Now ya pots all empty, maybe that’s why ya no-showed in ya own fuckin league… meh, didn't like the wording, but still, nice pers 5/10 >9th likes to be in charge of rhymes, copies ‘n’ pastes just so he can control a spit… Claims to be “A Master of the Verbal Arts” but really he just talks a load of shit… hah, i liked this one 7/10 >Challenged SPuL and me to a 2-on-1 I gotta admit it was a bold move… But ya ain’t worth shit, it only takes one of us to write a check and own you…(cheque) haha, good closer 7/10 overall: 35/70 = 50%....the start of your verse man, really hurt you i think...stuff wasn't that good, but you really picked up near the end, i think if you kept that consistency throught out, you coulda taken this easy....first part just had some dumb concepts/no personals.....but the end was cool...keep up 9th >You're cocky as hell, but before that your skill we hardly knew Someone said "Solo's dope!" I just replied "I'm Sorry...Who??" dope personal, nice opener 7/10 >I've persevered, earned a rep, but your hopes were so bleak You changed your name so you could hop my nuts if I hit a cold streak meh, decent 5/10 >"So weak" is an understatement, your spittin' is cursed You're the center of attention…when we see where you positioned your verse hahaha, i laughed at this, nice pers again 7/10 >Yeah, "solo" lines are played, but really you don't bring forces Only d/r's, oh, sorry, I mean all the King's horses haha, clever 6/10 .But if I accused you of that, you'd get bent out of shape like limbos You couldn't bring the pane if you were installin' my windows cool...6/10 >Claim to be royalty, but I remain skeptical And have your rhymes throne…in the trash receptacle dope closer, 7/10 overall: 38/60 = 63% - hmm, i thought 9th's verse was more consistent, with harder punches, and his personals were really effective in this one....umm, but still, good battle, just that 9th came harder, with better wordplay, wittier punches...and had better personals....... good battle though, keep up to both, no hate v/9th degree |
this is fuckin retarded
Drakel, we cool and all but seriously you know shit all to be voting on this saying i have no personals to begin with every bar has a personal in it.............. 1st bar - personal on his name, and the fact he goes around saying he is RV's biggest gangster!! 2nd bar - personal on his user title "Vigilante Status" cuz vigilante is sumone who believes they are above the law!!! 3rd bar - if you see many of the beef threads, 9th is always in there talking sense. 4th bar - personal on his sig 5th bar - personal on the fact that he no-showed in his KLL league 6th bar - personal on his sig again 7th bar - personal on the shit he said in awardz forum |
Voted For: I'm Sorry....WHO??"
Pretty tight battle but i think Ice-D won this .. it was a very good battle but to me ice d just had better punchlines , and nicer personals Ice-D Create a new law son, this ain’t 1st or 2nd, I commit murder in the 9th Degree… RV’s Gangsta?? The only time you touch a G is when ya type the key… Nice opener, good punch.. Ya see flashing images of ya death, 9th looked at me and he blinked… Vigilante?? Only time ya above the law is in chopper rides over the precinct… Ha, Nice. Always with logical answers ‘n’ shit, seriously 9th must be a mass-debater…(masturbator) So I guess the only thing for you to decide is…jerk off right now or later… LOL... nice punchline I’ll help ya diss…”Solo is gay!!” there you go 9th, you can have a freebie… Got ya samurai sig so ya understand why ya lines make me wanna ‘hara-kiri’…* Decent , i wouldnt have gotten it if you didnt explin wat hara kin meant Pot of golden lyrics got ya winnin…I get it, after all leprechauns are a lucky breed… Now ya pots all empty, maybe that’s why ya no-showed in ya own fuckin league… nice personal 9th likes to be in charge of rhymes, copies ‘n’ pastes just so he can control a spit… Claims to be “A Master of the Verbal Arts” but really he just talks a load of shit… Decent, Challenged SPuL and me to a 2-on-1 I gotta admit it was a bold move… But ya ain’t worth shit, it only takes one of us to write a check and own you…(cheque) Nice.. closer , good punch decent personal 9th Degree You're cocky as hell, but before that your skill we hardly knew Someone said "Solo's dope!" I just replied "I'm Sorry...Who??" HHAHAA.. NICE OPENER! I've persevered, earned a rep, but your hopes were so bleak You changed your name so you could hop my nuts if I hit a cold streak Sorry it started out good and sorta died "So weak" is an understatement, your spittin' is cursed You're the center of attention…when we see where you positioned your verse Ha nice punch Yeah, "solo" lines are played, but really you don't bring forces Only d/r's, oh, sorry, I mean all the King's horses Not feelin it But if I accused you of that, you'd get bent out of shape like limbos You couldn't bring the pane if you were installin' my windows Decent.. could have been better Claim to be royalty, but I remain skeptical And have your rhymes throne…in the trash receptacle Nice , closer Explanation: Pretty tight battle but ima have to give this one to Ice , he had harder punchlines,..better personals..structure was better..keep it up Vote- Ice-D |
1st bar...you mentioned his name, and it was the set-up so its not even an effective personal, and you're just stating you kill people in the 9th degree....explain how thats an effective punch......and i've never really seen 9th claim he's 'RV's biggest gangsta', so the punch sucked
2nd bar...more of a personal than the first one, but still....you're not relating anything 9th's done, just playing off the word vigilante......and i know what a vigilante is, but do they fly in choppers over prescints alot in england or something? 3rd bar...i said it was good, but set up coulda been worded better....and punch was just basic, coulda been a 6, but thats not changing much 4th bar...not bad, like i said...creative...but set up has been done before, not really a peronal since you're bringing another aspect into the battle, the hari karri thing or whatever, but still relates to samurais...okay personal 5th bar...yes, only true personal, because the punch was directed fully at 9th and something he has done on RV (that is what encorporates an effective personal to me, hitting them with shit they're actually done, not just relating a punch to their sig) 6th bar...yes, another personal, and i gave you the props 7th bar...actually, the punch you used was not a personal, it was kinda....but you were a little self-gloring on this one, this was just wordplay and a punch....set up was a personal, but it had no punch...so yeah this is my breakdown....if you have a problem with me voting, ask me never to vote on your shit again, but thats how i saw it....i dont give a flying fuck if you dq it, just my input, not everyone has the same perspectives, or just returns the favour like casper did, lol......but yeah, pz |
Voted For: I'm Sorry....WHO??"
Ice-D Create a new law son, this ain’t 1st or 2nd, I commit murder in the 9th Degree… RV’s Gangsta?? The only time you touch a G is when ya type the key… first half was aight, Typing "g" was nice concept Ya see flashing images of ya death, 9th looked at me and he blinked… Vigilante?? Only time ya above the law is in chopper rides over the precinct… lol nice bar Always with logical answers ‘n’ shit, seriously 9th must be a mass-debater…(masturbator) So I guess the only thing for you to decide is…jerk off right now or later… very creative bar LMFAO I’ll help ya diss…”Solo is gay!!” there you go 9th, you can have a freebie… Got ya samurai sig so ya understand why ya lines make me wanna ‘hara-kiri’…* set up went wrong in this one.. Pot of golden lyrics got ya winnin…I get it, after all leprechauns are a lucky breed… Now ya pots all empty, maybe that’s why ya no-showed in ya own fuckin league… nice personal ROFL 9th likes to be in charge of rhymes, copies ‘n’ pastes just so he can control a spit… Claims to be “A Master of the Verbal Arts” but really he just talks a load of shit… haa nice play on words Challenged SPuL and me to a 2-on-1 I gotta admit it was a bold move… But ya ain’t worth shit, it only takes one of us to write a check and own you…(cheque) nice wordplay.. aight closer Solo you came real hard only one bar fell apart.. You had some nice wordplay throughout your verse, some of your lines were kinda stretched but other than that, good verse. I can tell this will be a close battle. 9th Degree You're cocky as hell, but before that your skill we hardly knew Someone said "Solo's dope!" I just replied "I'm Sorry...Who??" Really nice personal to start out with I've persevered, earned a rep, but your hopes were so bleak You changed your name so you could hop my nuts if I hit a cold streak aight.. i got it, but wasn't feeling it much "So weak" is an understatement, your spittin' is cursed You're the center of attention…when we see where you positioned your verse lmao nice personal cuz his verse is centered in this battle as well LOL HAHAHHAH damn Yeah, "solo" lines are played, but really you don't bring forces Only d/r's, oh, sorry, I mean all the King's horses LMFAO another nice personal But if I accused you of that, you'd get bent out of shape like limbos You couldn't bring the pane if you were installin' my windows nice wordplay and metaphor... Claim to be royalty, but I remain skeptical And have your rhymes throne…in the trash receptacle nice wordplay.. aight closer 9th Degree you came hard in this battle as well you had less wordplay than Solo. But you had nice personals it as well. HAA LMMFAO @ the opener, and I was feeling your set-up's for punches as well as the punches themselves. Verdict: *READS BOTH AGAIN* This a real hard decision but I think Solo took this one by a hair.. |
Voted For: 9th Degree
i was feeling this verse alot more...... overall i just thought 9th degrees had alot better wordplay and vocab...alot of solo's stuff was played i thought with the murder to the 9th degree. 9th- you had alot of good things in yours only thing that sorta bothered me was the line length ... if you made it all match it woulda been a easier flow... but still i think you got this one easy you had alot better metaphors and the only real weak line i thought was ""So weak" is an understatement, your spittin' is cursed" other than that you took it easy ice-d also a killer verse but i jus think it wasnt as creative as 9ths .... I’ll help ya diss…”Solo is gay!!” there you go 9th, you can have a freebie… Got ya samurai sig so ya understand why ya lines make me wanna ‘hara-kiri’…* that coulda been a better line if you set it up... our rhymes were really forced and thats one of the reasons 9th will get this i think... but still i did like the mass debater line... even though it was played. ha but yea nice verse Vote//9th Degree |
werd!!!
close battle!!! this the best text battle of MAY :thumbup: |
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