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Babble.On vs SleepedOn2
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-21-05 at 07:24 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
SleepedOn2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 07:27 PM.
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Babble.On has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 07:30 PM.
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watch the nerves but im talkin about babble on he is a remindin sight//
he has some personal issues wit his internal thoughts oh yea Napoleon Dynamite// crazy shit is funny right uh no if you think so take yourself to the psychic// free chance at pussy for babble...give it to him but he dont like it// no return huh it was too underated for you at RB// so he creates the same name on this other related site...RV// yea i been there done that dude...but you have no experience// just the fact u cud probably be a serious biter unbeatable so even u fear it// get in a real freestyle...hes a choke up but hold your gut n dont throw up// oh u forgot your rap that u were goin to bite so thats why yesterday he didnt show up // son son wanted to battle n never showed up but was the first to battle me today hmmmmm i wonder........ gl son son NOOOOOO bitin !!!!!! i got nothin to loose wut about you |
a no show damn i didnt kno he needed all this time to come up wit his verse it wasnt even supposed to be this long but i still went wit his time limit
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Hmmm, I don’t recall ever setting a time limit, I just set it to the default
(Stretches) Jerking off some circus clowns is the only time this homo thug “beats on fools” Battles don’t end, cuz if your names in the title now imma get Sleeped on Too! Fuck, like bent and torn puzzle pieces, Sleeped just has no place in the game. Make you the Lil’ Wayne album you reppin, you’re left just a face in the flames. Idolizing rappers is childish, but you tried to copy and battle and blundered at me. But I thunder with ease, cuz after I spit the only time you really feelin 500 degrees. Babble easily crushes this fools hope for rapping, guess now he’s owed a dream. But like fighting with the milkman this punk bitch already got KO’d by Cream! SleepedOn’s my next target, and like intolerant terrorists I bomb n hurt gays. Face it, the only time the average niggas is feelin Sleep is after long work days. (Wipes your remains off my Timbs) |
^ I dunno where any of your personals came from. I didn't ever not show up to a battle, I set this one up. If you set another one, I didn't check in because I had already checked in here. I've never been on RB, I dunno where that came from. And biting..... find me a single bar in my verse that doesn't have a personal.
Yeah, shut the fuck up. |
Uppin this motherfucker for votes.................
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Uppin this shit for you lazy fucks who won't vote.
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Bump, why the fuck doesn't anyone vote on this god damned site?
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Voted For: Babble.On
Sleepedon2: ok your verse was ok the structure was iight and so was ya punches It wasnt the best verse I'v seen but its good so you deserve a 6/10 best line: watch the nerves but im talkin about babble on he is a remindin sight// he has some personal issues wit his internal thoughts oh yea Napoleon Dynamite// Babble on : your verse was much better funny enjoyable good punches good personals dood disses best line: Jerking off some circus clowns is the only time this homo thug “beats on fools” Battles don’t end, cuz if your names in the title now imma get Sleeped on Too! Please return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191905 |
Up[pin this whack ass battle for some more votes. Damn.
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Voted For: Babble.On
watch the nerves but im talkin about babble on he is a remindin sight// he has some personal issues wit his internal thoughts oh yea Napoleon Dynamite// —2…wack crazy shit is funny right uh no if you think so take yourself to the psychic// free chance at pussy for babble...give it to him but he dont like it// —4…okay no return huh it was too underated for you at RB// so he creates the same name on this other related site...RV// —0…not feelin this one yea i been there done that dude...but you have no experience// just the fact u cud probably be a serious biter unbeatable so even u fear it// —5…decent get in a real freestyle...hes a choke up but hold your gut n dont throw up// oh u forgot your rap that u were goin to bite so thats why yesterday he didnt show up // —4…don’t know if this is true.. decent overall – u had a decent drop, elevate a little more though……ur punches were decent & the structure + flow needs help…but decent drop form you 15/50 Jerking off some circus clowns is the only time this homo thug “beats on fools” Battles don’t end, cuz if your names in the title now imma get Sleeped on Too! —5…decent persona + punch Fuck, like bent and torn puzzle pieces, Sleeped just has no place in the game. Make you the Lil’ Wayne album you reppin, you’re left just a face in the flames. —3…okay Idolizing rappers is childish, but you tried to copy and battle and blundered at me. But I thunder with ease, cuz after I spit the only time you really feelin 500 degrees. —1…weak here Babble easily crushes this fools hope for rapping, guess now he’s owed a dream. But like fighting with the milkman this punk bitch already got KO’d by Cream! —5…decent punch SleepedOn’s my next target, and like intolerant terrorists I bomb n hurt gays. Face it, the only time the average niggas is feelin Sleep is after long work days. —4…average closer overall – u had an aight verse too.. punches need improving also……but ur structure was decent, the flow needs to be a little less instead of more meaning (make ur structure a little lower)…but ur vocab was decent too overall u came better in this battle 18/50 |
Cool shit, time to be uppin this for some more now.
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Voted For: Babble.On
Weak Battle but iight versez! vote)Babble On! ........................... First Of All Babble Ya Verse Was Alright Da punchez Were Decent Word-play Was iight Also!Structure Was A LiL Off!Da Rhymin Scheme Was pretty Cool!Personalz>Didnt Really See Any! .................................. Sleepedon ................................. Your Verse Was hittin!i wasnt really Feelin da Punches!Personalz (umm) Decent!Wordplay Wa Alright!Rhynin Scheme was Cool!Structure Was not That Koo ......................... Punches>Babble Rhymin Scheme>Babble Personalz>Babble Structuree>Babble Wordplay>Tie So I Would Have To Say Babble! .......................................... Pleaz PLEAZ RTF in my Battlez Below! ............................................ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191658 |
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