Where im from
 

I love baggin my jeans keepin my timbs clean
bang in my black tee slang in my whyte tee.
fuk the police fuk show..gangstas got a code (thug life )
fuck da city and jobs
hate tht there's niccas out there aint doin shyt lyke da police squad
don't hate................................ tht aint it (i just strtd)
don't hate me for bein da fact tht I'm gangsta
hate da fact thts there roaches in houses
hate da fact thts there's faces on milk cartons
hate da fact thts there's rats all ova da city
and thys just the outside come inside the shell
Scared to die cuz I don't wanna go to hell
sometimes don't believe in god cuz I live in hell
listen I gotta story to tell I live in a place where teens don't know how to spell
mutherfucka I live in hell
everyday I cry cuz I always hear the sounds of sirens
think about all the people thts dyin
cuz soldiers stay loyal thier the onlii niccas to trust
they come out on the block lyke
who want beef who want it wit us corpses pop up anywhere need pickup trucks (oOO shiit)
All I'm seein is violence enough to stop the raps
see my clique beefin call to know I got there back (cock's gun)













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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191135

Thought this was solid overall man. Content had some nice quality, was kind of a in-your-face type track. Only thing I didn't like was the flow, seem a bit choppy to me. My suggestion would be to work on that...

thnks duke but what u mean choppy and im plannin to use thys when i go to the studio

people is sleepin on it!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^

come on sonn at least 2pages on commentin