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C_R_E_A_M vs schema
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16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-21-05 at 10:29 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:54 AM.
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C_R_E_A_M has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 10:15 AM.
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only slow cats supportin this lame...
my victory's gon prolly be more underscored than his name... think you look mean in your throwback... but on the real dogg...your the kinda small fish i usually throw back... when i fish for bitches with my long cock... but if your girl come near me...i just might hook 'er like ya mom's job... rewind a minute and look who you steppin to cmon dogg...even dude in your sig looks skeptical... no wonder real vets dont see yall... when that l column's lookin like a fat kid on the see saw... and im sorry to my fans on the site... id have way more personals...if id ever heard of dude in my life... nobody thinks im gon be passin the belt... you know your gon lose...look even your sig's askin for help... plus you act thug but you aint movin that weight... and you and i both know...the only cream you ever had's on your face... |
Imma have ta put da tool ta ya dome and put 2 iN-Ya...(1)
cuz dawgie da buLLeTz sTaY HoT even iN De-CeMBa...(2) if i CreEp-Ya,imma SleEp-Ya* when i SnEeK-Ya...(3) den put u in a ChUrCh GeTiN ViEwEd but ya not a PrEaCh-a...(4) dawg i know bout PuShiN-DruGz,n ShOotiN-DuDeZ...(5) if i clap,i PuSh-In-SluGz,and leave u in a BoX CoNFuSeD like RuBiX-CuBeZ...(6) yeah i wear da armor,gotta protect da chest-bro...(7) got it unda da white t,hand gripin neva letn da teck-go...(8) i been LyRICaL since i FiRsT-LeaRnEd-Ta-TaLk...(9) been HuStLeN since i FiRsT-LeArnEd-Ta-WaLk...(10) u been a FaG-SiNcE-BiRtH...(11) a TaRgEt,time ta put dis FaG-iN-DiRt...(12) he dont wear JeaNz,so iMMa BlaSt-HiS-SkiRt...(13) putin 16 in hiz AnuS,but his AsS-WoNt-HuRT...(14) u'z juzt a PraCtiCe-DuMmy,who be ActiN-FuNny,BrOkE n BuMMin...(15) only time He SpiT a LoT iz when his BoYFriEnD CuMMin...(16) |
Voted For: schema
schema got this for sure other dude, you just basically self-glored, and tried using multies, they were aight....but seriously, not enough dissing towards your opponent....and too many played concepts, nothing creative, everything was lacking.....just a basic verse all-round....elevate schema, kinda basic yourself, but you stayed consistent dissin him, and thats what matters, but this seems like a real old battle anyways, haha.....but still, this verse was kinda lame, but still was enough to beat the other dude, word v/schema |
Voted For: schema
schema: only slow cats supportin this lame... my victory's gon prolly be more underscored than his name... Lol liked this opener, somewhat humbling yourself, liked the personal think you look mean in your throwback... but on the real dogg...your the kinda small fish i usually throw back... decent when i fish for bitches with my long cock... but if your girl come near me...i just might hook 'er like ya mom's job... lol keeping up the fishing metaphor, decent punch rewind a minute and look who you steppin to cmon dogg...even dude in your sig looks skeptical... decent personal no wonder real vets dont see yall... when that l column's lookin like a fat kid on the see saw... Nice personal on thelosing record and im sorry to my fans on the site... id have way more personals...if id ever heard of dude in my life... decent punch nobody thinks im gon be passin the belt... you know your gon lose...look even your sig's askin for help... Feeling the personal plus you act thug but you aint movin that weight... and you and i both know...the only cream you ever had's on your face... Lol liked this closer C_R_E_A_M: Imma have ta put da tool ta ya dome and put 2 iN-Ya... cuz dawgie da buLLeTz sTaY HoT even iN De-CeMBa... Weak opener, no real punch if i CreEp-Ya,imma SleEp-Ya* when i SnEeK-Ya... den put u in a ChUrCh GeTiN ViEwEd but ya not a PrEaCh-a... Ok...no real punch again dawg i know bout PuShiN-DruGz,n ShOotiN-DuDeZ... if i clap,i PuSh-In-SluGz,and leave u in a BoX CoNFuSeD like RuBiX-CuBeZ... [center]Jesus Christ I can't even continue with this vote. Schema, seen betterfrom you but you definately outshined this kid. If you're making a comeback to text then get back on track so I don't have to read more opposing verses like this, lol. |
right.....it wasnt really a battle verse...i was way off lol...oh well...i can take a loss...upin!
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Voted For: schema
I think that Schema got this battle because i feel that Schema came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Schema got it was effective and was on point C_R_E_A_M you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Schema good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Schema and flow and structure i'll give to Schema. V/Schema RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed Vote removed by Mad Dog's request |
Voted For: schema
Imma have ta put da tool ta ya dome and put 2 iN-Ya...(1) cuz dawgie da buLLeTz sTaY HoT even iN De-CeMBa...(2) 4...weak opener, just sum shit talkin!! if i CreEp-Ya,imma SleEp-Ya* when i SnEeK-Ya...(3) den put u in a ChUrCh GeTiN ViEwEd but ya not a PrEaCh-a...(4) 4...weak again, nice multies though!! dawg i know bout PuShiN-DruGz,n ShOotiN-DuDeZ...(5) if i clap,i PuSh-In-SluGz,and leave u in a BoX CoNFuSeD like RuBiX-CuBeZ...(6) 5...an actual punch, but on a played concept!! yeah i wear da armor,gotta protect da chest-bro...(7) got it unda da white t,hand gripin neva letn da teck-go...(8) 3...weak, what is wearin armour gotta do with dissin ya opponent i been LyRICaL since i FiRsT-LeaRnEd-Ta-TaLk...(9) been HuStLeN since i FiRsT-LeArnEd-Ta-WaLk...(10) 2...talkin bout yaself is gay!! u been a FaG-SiNcE-BiRtH...(11) a TaRgEt,time ta put dis FaG-iN-DiRt...(12) 2...homo lines are gay (WORDPLAY) he dont wear JeaNz,so iMMa BlaSt-HiS-SkiRt...(13) putin 16 in hiz AnuS,but his AsS-WoNt-HuRT...(14) 3...WTF!!! this is a battle, what the fuck are you in!! u'z juzt a PraCtiCe-DuMmy,who be ActiN-FuNny,BrOkE n BuMMin...(15) only time He SpiT a LoT iz when his BoYFriEnD CuMMin...(16) 3...homo shit again!!! OVERALL: 26/80 only slow cats supportin this lame... my victory's gon prolly be more underscored than his name... 5...aight personal, cud be better!! think you look mean in your throwback... but on the real dogg...your the kinda small fish i usually throw back... 4...naw!! this was weak yo!! when i fish for bitches with my long cock... but if your girl come near me...i just might hook 'er like ya mom's job... 5...kinda funny, but you need to word shit better!! rewind a minute and look who you steppin to cmon dogg...even dude in your sig looks skeptical... 6...nice line, similar concept to what i used recently!! no wonder real vets dont see yall... when that l column's lookin like a fat kid on the see saw... 6...LoL!! nice line!! fat kids are cool. and im sorry to my fans on the site... id have way more personals...if id ever heard of dude in my life... 7...werd!!! this punch makes up for the whole verse!! nobody thinks im gon be passin the belt... you know your gon lose...look even your sig's askin for help... 6...gettin better with the punches now!! plus you act thug but you aint movin that weight... and you and i both know...the only cream you ever had's on your face... 4...BOO!!! homo shit is played!! OVERALL: 43/80 pretty weak battle i have seen both do better..... ...cream, you had mostly shit talkin and played concepts.... .......there were no real punches in ya verse and schema had some played concepts........... ......started off wack but came good to the end ....but then finished with a played closer..... but still had punches in his verse.....so my vote is.... V/ - schema RTF on this battle!!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191730 |
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^^this is a good idea....remove ya vote if people dont return da fava on your battles.....imma do da same maybe i can get future battles closed |
nah...its bitch...
when you vote on someones battle its not like a guarantee that theyre gonna rtf...you can ask them to but forcing them to is gay... BOOOOOOO... |
Voted For: C_R_E_A_M
Imma have ta put da tool ta ya dome and put 2 iN-Ya...(1) cuz dawgie da buLLeTz sTaY HoT even iN De-CeMBa...(2) if i CreEp-Ya,imma SleEp-Ya* when i SnEeK-Ya...(3) den put u in a ChUrCh GeTiN ViEwEd but ya not a PrEaCh-a...(4) dawg i know bout PuShiN-DruGz,n ShOotiN-DuDeZ...(5) if i clap,i PuSh-In-SluGz,and leave u in a BoX CoNFuSeD like RuBiX-CuBeZ...(6) yeah i wear da armor,gotta protect da chest-bro...(7) got it unda da white t,hand gripin neva letn da teck-go...(8) i been LyRICaL since i FiRsT-LeaRnEd-Ta-TaLk...(9) been HuStLeN since i FiRsT-LeArnEd-Ta-WaLk...(10) u been a FaG-SiNcE-BiRtH...(11) a TaRgEt,time ta put dis FaG-iN-DiRt...(12) he dont wear JeaNz,so iMMa BlaSt-HiS-SkiRt...(13) putin 16 in hiz AnuS,but his AsS-WoNt-HuRT...(14) u'z juzt a PraCtiCe-DuMmy,who be ActiN-FuNny,BrOkE n BuMMin...(15) only time He SpiT a LoT iz when his BoYFriEnD CuMMin...(16) Yo Ya Verse Wuz Iight, Nuthin 2 Hard Hittin, Da Wordplay Culd Ov Been Better, Yo Rhymez Wuld Be The Same Stylez Az 50 In'a Battle lol...I Lyke Da Rubix Cube Shit Yo, Dat Wuz Nice, U Dint Have No Personalz? Dat Took Alot Out Ov Yo Verse Dawg, Work On Focusin On Dissin Yo Oppenent , U Feel? only slow cats supportin this lame... my victory's gon prolly be more underscored than his name... think you look mean in your throwback... but on the real dogg...your the kinda small fish i usually throw back... when i fish for bitches with my long cock... but if your girl come near me...i just might hook 'er like ya mom's job... rewind a minute and look who you steppin to cmon dogg...even dude in your sig looks skeptical... no wonder real vets dont see yall... when that l column's lookin like a fat kid on the see saw... and im sorry to my fans on the site... id have way more personals...if id ever heard of dude in my life... nobody thinks im gon be passin the belt... you know your gon lose...look even your sig's askin for help... plus you act thug but you aint movin that weight... and you and i both know...the only cream you ever had's on your face... Yo Nice Rhymes Boi! Flow Wuz Good, Punz Wuz Alot Mo Complex Than CREAMS, Good Personalz & U Focused On Dissin Him Thru Out, Dta Iz Wat He Lacked Good Job Both, Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature |
O Shiiiiiiiit!!!!!! Dat Vote Wuz 4 Schema, Get Dat Changed Yall, Sorry 4 Da Inconvience
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Voted For: schema
SCHEMA: only slow cats supportin this lame... my victory's gon prolly be more underscored than his name... ^^^UHHH DECENT OPENER-PERSONAL think you look mean in your throwback... but on the real dogg...your the kinda small fish i usually throw back... ^^^OKAY when i fish for bitches with my long cock... but if your girl come near me...i just might hook 'er like ya mom's job... ^^^COCK & JOB DONT RYHME FAM...DONT FORCE rewind a minute and look who you steppin to cmon dogg...even dude in your sig looks skeptical... ^^DECENT PERSONAL no wonder real vets dont see yall... when that l column's lookin like a fat kid on the see saw... ^^^TOTALLY WACK! and im sorry to my fans on the site... id have way more personals...if id ever heard of dude in my life... ^^^NO! nobody thinks im gon be passin the belt... you know your gon lose...look even your sig's askin for help... ^^^DA SIG PERSONAL R GETTIN WEAK...AN U SHOULD OF EXPLAINED IT plus you act thug but you aint movin that weight... and you and i both know...the only cream you ever had's on your face ^^^WEAK CLOSER... CREAM: Imma have ta put da tool ta ya dome and put 2 iN-Ya...(1) cuz dawgie da buLLeTz sTaY HoT even iN De-CeMBa...(2) ^^^LOL...FUKK OUT HERE if i CreEp-Ya,imma SleEp-Ya* when i SnEeK-Ya...(3) den put u in a ChUrCh GeTiN ViEwEd but ya not a PrEaCh-a...(4) ^^^NO DAT PUNCHLINE WAS WACK dawg i know bout PuShiN-DruGz,n ShOotiN-DuDeZ...(5) if i clap,i PuSh-In-SluGz,and leave u in a BoX CoNFuSeD like RuBiX-CuBeZ...(6) ^^^FLOW WAS GOOD...BUT WHY R U TALKIN ABOUT PUSHIN DRUGZ IN A BATTLE? yeah i wear da armor,gotta protect da chest-bro...(7) got it unda da white t,hand gripin neva letn da teck-go...(8) ^^^R BATTLIN OR U JUST TRYIN DA SPIT?? i been LyRICaL since i FiRsT-LeaRnEd-Ta-TaLk...(9) been HuStLeN since i FiRsT-LeArnEd-Ta-WaLk...(10) ^^^&...WHUTU DOES DAT HAVE 2 DO WITH DIS BATTLE U LOSIN?? u been a FaG-SiNcE-BiRtH...(11) a TaRgEt,time ta put dis FaG-iN-DiRt...(12) ^^OKAY he dont wear JeaNz,so iMMa BlaSt-HiS-SkiRt...(13) putin 16 in hiz AnuS,but his AsS-WoNt-HuRT...(14) ^^^NO u'z juzt a PraCtiCe-DuMmy,who be ActiN-FuNny,BrOkE n BuMMin...(15) only time He SpiT a LoT iz when his BoYFriEnD CuMMin...(16) ^^^SO WACK V/SCHEMA |
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