morse code vs immortality
 

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Check in by: 05-18-05 at 11:16 PM

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morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 10:47 PM.

immortality has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 10:48 PM.

your girl is a sister? than we gon have to incest
ima 'eat' her out just becuz i love her 'breasts'
you have no knowledge like a book thats empty
im 'running' the game but your styles just 'shifty'
your filthy and wack so please stop at rap
cuz your so poor you prolly live in a shack
im immortality unable to die unable to be beat
dont stand up to me kid plz go have a seat
im takin over your town like a herd of flies
but fuck stingin ill make sure everyone dies
i got this on lock no one can open a win
cuz you say im not gangsta but you dont know where ive been
im beatin your verse with just typed werds
but this is a text basttle so that is of course

lmfao at this newb trying to battle me..

immortality will end up with an unamity fatality
have your family "morning" all "night" cuz of the calamity
like a "bag of fleas" your "scratching me" with brutality*
which further proves the true pussy in this wack emcee*
blast at me? you'd only attempt that with your cum
im "chewin" you out my punches "stick" to you like some "gum"
my flow causes a rec in your stomach quick grab some tums
prostituting, standing on the corner, exposing your inner bum**
shit my punches hit harder than irritated salesmen at doors
your drops get ignored more than gum on the floors***
i own a hot structure with freezing cold flows
so people call the firefighters who bring out my hoes
everyone knows that this will get 5-0 votes
so theres no reason in checkin the pollz
Im killin you but yet your on a suicide journey
stop rapping your wack and you need to attend your tourny****

*fleas make you scratch...cats also scratch...cats=PUSSY cats
**prostitues expose their bum(their ass)...bums also stand on corners (and sleep on them, lol)
***people always step on the gum on floors
****he is running a yahoo game tourny

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

looks like a close battle but im just checkin polls good luck you guys!!

^lol, this aint close........ne wayz.........................uppin

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

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Voted For: morse code

morse code beat the shit out of immortality. immortality is a fucking faggot whoever this guy is. you need to step yo game up. i cant believe how whack yo shit is. i hope that immortality put his verse on there as a joke.

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Weerd I was thinking the exact same shit

Voted For: morse code

Structure - Inmortality
Flow - Both
Punchlines - Both
Vocab - Morse Code
Mutli's - Morse Code
Word/Nameplay -Morse Code

but morse code whole shit hitted harder, like more personal
but inmortaliti's flow, and structure is ver very good...
but this is a battle..... u gotta have more punchlines

v/ M.C.

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Voted For: morse code

you get the win...cuz immortality didnt have a good verse...but, you talked about gum twice....

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^lol, yea i realized that after i posted it, lol, o well

uppin.............................................

Voted For: morse code

morse code - Okay, this was a onesided battle, you came pretty hard in this battle man. Nice flow through-out the whole battle, with a great vocabulary and good punches. You had some pretty deecent concepts and hard hitting punches. The wordplay was pretty deecent, and the metas were pretty good. Just elevate a bit on your structure and you're fine....7.5/10

immortality - Played, played, played, played....man sex jokes are so old, so your opener is terrible...but other than that it's aight...most of the concepts are played though..You had some pretty forced rhymes though...Elevate your ideas for punches, be original, just keep elevating and you'll be fine homie...6/10

Vote: morse code