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Carlton Banks vs CA$per
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10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-19-05 at 02:53 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 02:27 PM.
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Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 02:28 PM.
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this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start..... yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones... but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone... gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that.... that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit..... cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit.. homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin.. if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject... bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project... |
i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right. mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is. because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is. Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all.. you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!* stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses. But.. it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses! you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me. & come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory. |
sozzles peeps, my structure went haywire after i posted it, it wasn't like that in go advanced :(.
but anyways... *i checked his battles stats and he had 5 consecutive wins, then lost 4 in a row after that. meaning he elevated a bit, then fell off. i hope you get it. |
This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
this guy had harder punches and better wordplay...I was feelin this verse more still...
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i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot.
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i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot. # 2.
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This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
banks gets the v on this just thought his verse was better. but, the other verse has some good lines in it.
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i'd like to raise this battle up a notch, so it will get noticed and people will be obliged to vote and hand me my first win and whatnot. # 3.
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Voted For: CA$per
this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart.... cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start..... 5...weak opener, more filler than disses!!! yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones... but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone... 6...nice tom jones line!!! gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that.... that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black 5...weak again, not a good personal!! man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit..... cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit.. 4...weak shit, homo gay crap is played!! homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin.. if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin 4...weak!!! but ya not tryin as ya said!! but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject... bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project... 6...best bar of the verse!!! OVERALL: 30/60 (50%) i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight. then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right. 5...nice meta, but fairly weak!! mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is. because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is. 5...weak, played concept to!! Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all.. you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!* 4...still weak!!! consistensy is good though!! stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses. But.. it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses! 5...nice personal!!! NO!!! actually played and gay!!! you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me. & come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory. 5...another weak ass line!!!! OVERALL: 24/50 (49%) weak battle....wtf!!! casper ya didnt try and ya nearly lost, lucky for you ya opponent didnt drop anythin orignal or hot, carlton ya need to elevate and get creative, casper ya need to actually try in battles or next time ya might get whored!!! V/ - Ca$per RTF!!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191228 |
Lol Chea Uppin I Just Fukked Around Here As U See From My Shit Ill Try If Its Worth Tryin But This Kid Is No One So I Dont Really Give A Fukk Anyway Uppin....................
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Voted For: Carlton Banks
cartlon banks: i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight. then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right. ^^^^CONCEPT IS KIND OF PLAYED..BUT U PULLED IT OFF GOOD OPENER mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is. because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is. ^^^LMAOOOOOOO DOPE SHIT...ORGINIAL Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all.. you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!* ^^^NAH stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses. But.. it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses! ^^^WEAK PERSONAL you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me. & come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory. ^^^^DA FLOW WAS HORRIBLE HERE...BUT DA PUNCHLINE WAS DOPE...FIX YA STRUCTURE FAM casper: this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart.... cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start..... ^^^^LOL..DECENT OPENER yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones... but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone... ^^^LMAOOOOOOOOO GOOD PLAY OFF DAT SHIT WHEN CARTLON BANKS WAS DANCIN gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that.... that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black ^^^^HUH???? man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit..... cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit.. ^^^NOW UR GETTIN WACK homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin.. if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin ^^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ..UR BORIN ME NOW but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject... bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project... ^^^^LOL WOW U HAD A DECNT BAR AFTA 2 VERY WACK 1'S... V/CARTLON BANKS...HE HAD SOME CREATIVE PUNCHLINES....CASPER U STARTED OFF KIND OF GOOD THEN U JUST FEEL OFF REAL HARD..U GOTTA BRING IT DA WHOLE BATTLE RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL... |
Voted For: Carlton Banks
Aii This IS what I Think Carlton Banks Aii Man You STarted off pretty weak Man Id Have to tell you bcuz nobody else will tell you HONESTLY how you did these days but I think THAT YOU NEED TO0 WORK ON fixin ya structure up a lil bit bcuz Some people Will Judge your verse jus basically on how it looks which is a bunch of bullshit if you ask me Becuase you Cant Judge a book by its cover so i think that your verse LYRICALLY was terrfic but your verse Strcutre like was kinda off so try to fix that up a little bit in the future HIT UP THE BATTLE LINK IN MY SIG Casper Aii man Although your strcuture was on Your verse was off man Some of your bars didnt work together to create a correct punch and ya shit was really off LYRICALLY but I think That You Will fix that up in the time that comes to past HIT UP THE LINK IN MY SIG |
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