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FlowIntelligent. 05-19-05 02:50 PM

Flow Intelligent vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
 
Topical Battle Rules:

25-30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
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Topic: Insecurities

1 Day To Check, 1 Day To Drop


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System 05-20-05 10:03 AM

Flow Intelligent has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 10:03 AM.

System 05-20-05 11:53 AM

(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 11:53 AM.

~Luciano~ 05-20-05 06:33 PM


So as i sit here writing..bout my fifth or maybe 6th topical
I took a couple seconds to think bout..sumthing so logical
not really a worry but something thats defenetly a problem
I lost 15 pounds yet Still have these Minors..cant solve em
I take Milla Seconds 2 Acknowledge my Stomach then Chest
Thats Turning Muscular......but 200 Pounds Press is my Best
But still i have Minor Flab that seems to Ingulp Half of my Abs
With Muscular Growth in Half..But Living Fat is Half of my Past
That i Use to not be able to Face the Facts..that i was Husky
Carefully Ignoring the Pudges out my Shirt that Looked Chubby
But O No i can Rap better than Ne One in my Class....Im Best
At any Battle...but after bout 30 Mins of Babble..Im in Sweat
But not to Neglect..that once i went to all the Doctors Checks
I realized something new.....Im Basically a Midgit..Whats Next?
Besides being damn near 19...and towering at only Five Seven
Wish i was a Little Bit Taller..6ft and i would be in High Heaven
More than likely be picked to start on my schools Hoop Teams Coach told me...Next time Little Guy,Crushing my Hoop Dreams
O well i got Football and Rap nothing else..well why I Suppose
Then looked in the Mirror... why o why look at this Wide Nose
that seems to be placed on jus bout every.... black individual
that get pulled into the Hood Life..and Not into Black Spiritual
Worried bout will the females love me..or will they even like me
with these stubby legs..fat frame..wide nose....NOO not Likely
But i got Fight in me..,.So in the end maybe i will be ok..will I?
No Matter how Many females turn me down.neva will i feel Guys
i realize after numerous workouts..im in touch with my Health
Now Rv Knows my Flaws More than eva im in touch with Myself

FlowIntelligent. 05-21-05 09:32 AM

Aiight...


Look at yourself in a bathroom mirror, It’ll show that you stare
Until someone walks in, Look away so they don’t know that you care
Are you self consciously aware? I made a test and took just for fun
(Your self-conscious if you worried how your arms look while you run)
So we all claim to know a lot, But in reality we’re all haunted in dreams
Only ourselves during sleep, In public we’re how we want to be seen
And this is suppose to be reality? Please, Just listen with ya ear close
To the screen, (To break your mold you must do what you fear most)
Youth holds all of your career hopes, So it’s all practically fibs
(Imagination disappears when you confront what it actually is)
Fact is the fantasy is always better, Yet not lacking luck it seems
If your not exceedingly talented, Be handicapped for the luxuries
See what I mean? Closer parking, Bigger bathrooms that aint shared
Plus the ability to become invisible because people are afraid to stare
At someone in a wheel chair, Kinda like us around mirrors in public
We’re told what we want, Find what we really like, And fear to love it
Just a part of the mass, Another member of the crowd in the back
Who isn’t seen or heard because the noise is much too loud to react
And we’re proud of this fact? Everyone’s lost in understanding too
So fuck Insecurity, You must abandon it before it abandons you
Too late, Now take your real beliefs and start rewinding everything
(Because what you don’t understand you can define as anything)
From your mind comes many things, It’s not just a one hit threat
But we’re scared to accept idea’s if somebody hasn’t done it yet
Never taking responsibility for your actions, Basically change hurts
Everything staying the same is comfort, So babies are chained births
Understand what we’re faced with, A lot of foes with tethered hands
(Your insecure if you only give props to those you feel your better than)
I guess that makes you a veteran, But even that statements fake
(Your insecure thinking this is about you, So get your placement straight)

~Luciano~ 05-22-05 02:17 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-22-05 09:11 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-24-05 01:14 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-25-05 01:12 PM

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~Luciano~ 05-30-05 03:43 PM

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