Stanza vs FREESTYLE DaBoss
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-19-05 at 07:55 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed - went over line limit

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 05:59 PM.

Yo

Im Rippin This Internet Rappa Cuz He Not Worth My Game
Freestylin Against Da Boss?.....Yet My Talent Have No Gain

Each Bar Goes Jus a Lil To Far While I Crack This Cookie Jar
Beat This Geek To "Hollywood" Where He Will "See The Stars"

Wait A Min You From New Orleans Where N.O.Body Wins
Takin Another win You Mad Bcuz I Left ya Head in A Spin

Your Jus A Lil Too Wack Man Drop Ya verse? Why do You try
You Dont even Have Sig......You Jus Another Unknown guy

Well It Was Fun while it Lasted But I Have to merk you now
Remeber When You Battle Stanza.. Might as well bow down

Quickie !!Goodluck

FREESTYLE DaBOSS has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 06:27 PM.

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Stanza you deserve the tittle for biggest shit talker/
but don't forget who's ya father you jus a skywalker/
you kall yourself freestyling but it ain't working out
that good/I kick that real shit from my hood all the way
to yo neck of the woods/stay in ya place is what you should
do,kuz ain't nobody feeling ya/if you kome on my block woofing
shit then I'ma have ta deal witcha/you kouldn't ryme if
you had jay-z ghostwritting for ya/you got into some deep shit
now you lookin 4 a way out like Dora Tha Exployer/fuk ya ambitions
to be a ryda,I'll have niggas kome hide ya where nobody will
ever find ya/run thru you at top speed like I was a NASKAR driver/
you got a lil bitch up inside ya influencing yo intelect/
you better ask sumbody about ya boi DaBOSS I gets much respect/
you ain't never banged for a set so stop hatin on us real
ones/somebody tell this no rapping sideshow bob how DaBOSS
be killin em/

Voted For: FREESTYLE DaBOSS

Punches-DaBoSs...u had sum coo punches yo,nothin really hard hittin but u gots potential..Stanza ya N.O line was hot..keep elevaten both emcees

Multis-None...didnt see ANY multis from etha emcee...they aint really all that important ta learn...but expaned ya lyrical abilities and try ta do sum in future battles...

Personals-DaBoSs...this is what gets da vote along wit the Punches...u stayed dissen him thru ya whole verse which is real good in battles...

Vocab-Tie...both emcees were pretty basik...u really dont have to use big vocabulary...so i say this category dont really mean shit

Opener-Stanze...Nice opener,u started wit a good punch on that skywalker bar...good effort

Closer-Tie..Both emcees ended WEAKLY...not much effort put towards that

Overall Good Battle,work on ya structure@DaBoSS
Take time in ya barz@Stanza both yall got potential


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Voted For: Stanza

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stanza- that was pretty weak....you had good sturcute and flow...but you need some seriuos work on punches..so elevate on that...

freestyle.....man you came weak work on everything punches...flow and structure.....

v.stanza